Yeeees harry finally scores a maiden and the fact that the maiden was hermione only makes it better hehe, next maiden luna :v

Lol dealing with luna is always fun... for us readers xD poor harry have met her for more than 4 years and he still doesn't know how to deal with her :v and it looks like I was right in bashing ginny after all, what a total bitch for making herself to be the victim when she was doing the same thing harry is doing now but she probably did it out of spite because harry broke with her to go save the world so I don't feel sorry for her.

I don't get it. Why is Ginny being such a hypocrite? She acted like a whore while claiming to be in love and now she abuses him for trying to move on? Your characters need real development. Your Harry Potter is a wimp with absolutely no moral compass on the one side and on the other he is trying to come off as an exceptional gentleman. How does that work?

That took bravery. I don't think I could handle the pressure of being someone's first.

P.S. for some reason, I got the update for this chapter before the last

Harry would be a good teacher

loving it so far. mature cho is much better than in the books, maybe she really would be this way if not for cedric. hope harry gets over ginny, I usually prefer her but I like the way this story has gone.

17 chapters down and I still like it. Poor Harry... all those girls just abusing him...

Shit I hope he gets over her sometime because it's kinda annoying how into her he is even after all that shit :v

Nice, so harry has a new unbeatable wand that's amazing.

Tell that stupid fuck Varngue to go take a big and I mean "BIG FLYING FUCK OFF VERY TALL SHORT PIERE!" I have read other stories on this fanfic that are no worse or worser then yours. There is a reason it was given a M RATING! If he doesn't like it Don't READ THE DAMN THING ! I hate it when people can say something that will help the author the story or them as lest that they are doing ok a lest. If you can do that then shut the FUCK UP AND DON'T READ IT DUMB ASS! Sorry people like that piss me off. Now the last to chapters where real good. If they would look pass the sex ( which was hot by the way) they would see the meat of the story. Harry's wand being a possible unbeatable wand and the girls he maybe getting with. I like this story and it shows how much of a writer you are becoming. Please don't stop writing this are others you could write because of some haters. Keep up the great work. See you on your next update

nice work

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Great chapter. Love the blow job scene.

Great story

elephant-like penises. that is just like poetry