This fic is just amazing. All the characters are perfectly in-character, the story is well-done, the tension made me feel like I was gonna have a heart attack, the heartwarmers were beautiful, and all-in-all it's just amazing. I wouldn't mind seeing THE V2.

This story was very fun to read (though good lord is it long) and the premise is very interesting. I felt the canon season 1 was fun but needed a lot of work; this story improves on every front and does a great job expanding on the world and characters (I wish the writers could try even a 1/5 of what you wrote). I hope you make a sequel one day, because this was worth the time.

This is an extremely good story. Feels like some kind of RWBY that fills in all the gaps in the original series and adds so much new stuff. And Ruby is so cute! Well... when she doesn't use her semblance... because when she does she gets even cuter! :)
I'm not sure if I can finish reading this (426.000 words _) however it's definitely the best thing I've ever came across in "FanFiction"

Weissss are you serious? I'm so fucking mad right now

Well. Fuck. I gotta say, Penny is such a good girlAnd Blake, you stupid- HNNGNN IF YOU JUST COMMUNICATED PROPERLY NONE OF THIS WOULD HAVE HAPPENED. Sigh. Well at least she's free now!

I cannot comprehend how every chapter just keeps getting better and better. Every interaction never fails to make me laugh, and they're just- ugh! I love all of them so much I swear. Also? Is it just me or are we getting closer to poly team RWBY? MHMMM?

Mhmm~ Loving the conflict. Yknow, as much as Ruby and Blake are similar, in a way, Blake is safer than Ruby could ever be. Because as much as she has high chances of being discriminated, potentially killed or worse, she still has chances to go to a country where she's safe, to find people that would accept her as she is... Whereas Ruby, well, can't. Because the threat of Grimms is international. And everyone fears Grimm. No one, no matter their ethnicity, their race or other, would ever accept her at firsy sight, especially when her eyes cause such an effect of intense fear. So honestly, as rude as it might be, Blake is far better ofd than Ruby.

That was. a lovely chapter, full of bonding, experiences, character developpment, growth and- aarghhn! just. lovely.

...fuck. GOD DAMMIT BLAKE- I knew this would happen, she was getting way too angsty over this, BUT DAMMIT, TH THING YOU WERE ASKED NOT TO DO. AARGHF.

Oh... Well this chapter was just. heavy of emotions... Poor... everyone. Man. Penny not wanting to kill her friend... Ren wanting to keep Ruby's innocence... The entierity of Team RWBY... RUBYMAN.

Ugh,, my babes,,, look at my dumb children,,,

I cannot cease to say how much every interaction makes me so happy. Also yikes, Ruby that musnt have been fun.

That was. a lovely chapter, full of bonding, experiences, character developpment, growth and- aarghhn! just. lovely.

Oooohoh? Is this a poly RWBY Team I'm potentially seeing? Cuz.. Mhmhm~ there are some looks I'm seeing that please me greatly! Ah, teenagers. I see we have a group of dumbasses lesbians /3 hopefully they figure that all out, I cannot wait to see how that goes!

Well. Fuck. I gotta say, Penny is such a good girlAnd Blake, you stupid- HNNGNN IF YOU JUST COMMUNICATED PROPERLY NONE OF THIS WOULD HAVE HAPPENED. Sigh. Well at least she's free now!