|Reviews for The Separation of the Beloved|
| The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
Great story! I always though that Pantalaimon and Kirjava didn't get enough attention when it come's to FanFics.
| Tinkerbelle1 chapter 2 . 3/1/2003
*cries* It's so sad. but really good.
| Ashes chapter 2 . 2/15/2003
That was very good. You had a few spelling mistakes, mostly things like an I instead of an O. Overall it was well written and I can look foreward o more,
| Miss Mirabilis chapter 2 . 2/13/2003
That is beautifully expressed. Though I would suggest reading it through correcting the few typing errors (parags 4,6,7) and maybe altering a few of the longer sentences. I look forward to reading your ending. I feel as you do, that Lyra and Will should have been able to stay together. However we must also appreciate that Pullman is a master of his craft, in that the whole underlying structure of smaller break-ups leads inextricably to this incredible and heartwrenching ending. For another of Pullman's endings and if you have not read it, I recommend his Sally Lockhart series.