Reviews for GRAP Volume Two |
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![]() ![]() You're doing very poorly. The story isn't bad, but... Fuck, you HAVE 10 chapters and only seven favourites, with ONLY ONE REVIEW! OC stories tend to all suffer this way, as most people actively assume your characters will be Mary Sues, which is... I dunno. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a professor smith WHO fights with a screwdriver and WHO uses time dilation in a fight? I wonder WHO that could possibly be, and what he has a DOCTORate in. Although for some strange reason I think that he lives in a little blue house that moves around a lot. |