Reviews for Iris
Guest chapter 15 . 9/17
Please update!
LuckySock chapter 15 . 9/14
Love this! Please update soon!
MicaaAmaya chapter 15 . 7/24
Oh, when are you going to update! I need to know more, your story is fascinating me so far! Please update soon
LifeToDeath chapter 15 . 7/16
So incredibly well written. You have a great talent! I'm truly intrigued and cannot wait for you to update!
Hi chapter 15 . 7/15
Oh my word this is phenomenal. Please please please update. Sorry I was too in a rush to review on the other chapters. Literally can't wait to keep reading. Thank you. Thank you for this beautiful contribution to FF. This is so great.
KidFlash14 chapter 1 . 7/7
This is a really great story, I don't really even like Twilight that much, but this is one of the greatest stories I've read in a while. Congrats, you should be very proud.
Ohmicrofilm chapter 15 . 6/4
This is an incredible story. It's very unique and I've really been enjoying it. You're a fantastic writer and Iris is a great character. I'm excited to see where this goes!
anthea tronchard step chapter 15 . 5/22
Ok, I like the gist of your story but iris is too weak, so can you make her more, I dont know, determined, independent. Also, her breathing problems can you associate with Jacob rejecting her? make so that someone figures out she is afraid of him, how harsh, brutal is he towards her? Because if you will write all of your story in this way, you will stumble and it will become boring pretty soon. So far I like the Jacob you portrayed but like I wrote, make her more secure and let Sam protect her more in regards of Jacob. Jacob is a jerk in this. Maybe she can let the frustration out and let them know she doesn't want to be with Jacob. And then Jacob fight for her.
day dream and write chapter 15 . 5/15
continoue
Guest chapter 15 . 5/14
It was fantastic chapter. Please update
Guest chapter 15 . 5/3
Great chapter, really excited to see how it goes from here.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/1
Update please!
tiffy chapter 15 . 4/29
ahh oh my gosh i just found this story and i couldnt stop reading im feeling so impatient right now xD I cant wait for your next chapter! 3
moon eclipse shadows chapter 15 . 4/28
I really like where you are going with this. It's a very interesting take. :)

I'm very excited to read more! :D
Lulu chapter 15 . 4/23
Amazing! Update soon.
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