Reviews for Coffee with a Vampire
mad margaret chapter 1 . 1/23/2017
I wasn't sure how much I was going to like this one-shot. I can't imagine Barnabas getting spat at with rum, whether it was Willie or Ben, and he was frequently referred to as old, and I don't Barnabas thought of himself as that. Also you changed tenses back and forth from past to present and back. Other than that last thing, I think in fanfiction you have the right to rewrite characters as you like. That said, I ended up really liking the story. It is well-written and edited, and the dialogue is well thought out and executed. And to finish was a lovely, bittersweet ending. Good job.