Reviews for A Hard Lesson |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please oh please make a follow up chapter to this! Man this was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Forseti! Amusing. So were the Alterans before there Vorlon, around at the same time? If they existed did the Goa'uld? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic! :D Forseti is using the time honored Asgard tradition of bluffing! :D lol The writing could use a little polishing but overall excellent work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow really good ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was quite satisfying. I love seeing the Mimbari humbled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmmn i'd really like to see where this story goes from here! perhaps see where cooperation between earthforce and the minbari goes. it'd also be good if the antarctic gate and outpost was discovered and information on the better alteran hyperdrive was found and traded for tech the minbari have. (the reason i'm saying that earth outpost having ship schematics is that the outpost in antarctica was never fully explored in the show, it was much bigger at the start of atlantis when the ship left and let us not forget that the destiny series also was launched from earth. not to mention any other ship that might have been constructed or launched from there, its my opinion that before atlantis was built and before the continent became frozen that there would have been a full alteran city and shipyard there, or in the next couple of star systems). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking Minbari. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you made the Asgart visit the Mass effect universe next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a 'cute' little story. Lessons were learned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice and truth is a three side sword |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, the fucken LuLz in this story. I love this out come. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that could get really interesting as the conflict is resolved earlier and with less acrimony on all sides. The resulting teaming could create some very interesting possibilities. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good story no doubt |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed Forseti's lesson to the Minbari and the treaty/parley terms the three races came to that benefitted them all. |