|Reviews for Line in the Sand|
| Eriktheviking70 chapter 6 . 2/22/2022
An intriguing and fun story.
| CMVreud chapter 2 . 10/6/2021
"Am curious to see what powers it. Also how they avoided the problems that the Quarians face on
their liveships. Would like to have STG agents inserted into their community."
The Thinkers and Strangers Gilods kindly thank the Salarians for the entertainment.
Your totally normal citizens will be returned back to you after our Master have.. they will be returned to you.
"Indeed, Valern, Tevos, you both make good points. However, simply looking at that monstrosity, I
can tell you our first order of business must be having it either decommissioned, or handed over to
the Turian fleet. Such a ship would be the crown jewel of any fleet. If it was properly retrofitted,
we could use it to take control of the Terminus systems. If we had a human Spectre, I would
want them inserted on board. Alas, we have no such people."
I bet you an Alexandria and a Lung that you won't get the ship.
And even if. It's Tinkertech. When the ship says bye-bye whatever in a radius of AU will be bye-bye too.
| anonymous inc chapter 6 . 6/9/2021
my favorate line
move 12 AUs
is an au an actual form of measurement?
| EvilTheLast chapter 6 . 11/15/2019
Well, it looks like a good story. I hope you continue it.
| Sieben Nightwing chapter 6 . 1/30/2018
So what's Taylor (Skitter) doing, and when's the fun beginning?
| Bob chapter 4 . 1/10/2018
Please , if the reapers try their mindfuck thing then the simurgh will just counter mindfuck
| TheDisturbedDragon chapter 5 . 10/7/2017
Well done. Before, I advised that you hold on before continuing this storynow I'm pleased to say that it looks good so far. The council's reaction to the revelations was understandible, as was the summed-up backstory of the Wormverse humans. I hope this continues at equal qualityOne thing I am curious about is the actual capabilities of the ship. Obviously it's far beyond any ME-verse tech (matter annihilation, inverting a ship entirely, et cetera) but towhat degree? What I'm getting at is: are the Wormverse humans negotiating out of necessity/nor wanting to go full genocide, or are they unable to? i presume it's the formeras stated there re multiple generations of tinkers that have worked on it, so I'm going to assume nothing less than a black hole or hypernova will actually stand a good chance of damaging it.
Also, wht happened to the side effects of triggers? The need to seek conflict? Is that still around or did Scion remove it from the shards?
I look forward to the next chapter.
| ecoolasice chapter 5 . 10/4/2017
More of this story please
| Tha Shadow 750 chapter 4 . 10/2/2017
Only complaint I have is there's no such thing as dextro or levo alcohol, it's all the same (with the exceptions of whatever's added to it).
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
Ahem. Entities don't allow such foresight and Ziz is there to make sure nobody leave the party early.
| Bobboky chapter 5 . 10/1/2017
Very nice job
| coduss chapter 5 . 10/1/2017
glad to see this story's still around! bit of a meh chapter, but buildup's necessary
| Redaer Copious chapter 4 . 9/21/2017
Oh this is promising can the Imperator host a 2nd entity and further aid The Warrior entity?
| Puidwen chapter 4 . 5/25/2017
| grey-gahuul chapter 4 . 5/24/2017
I'm absolutely loving this story. Here's to hoping you update soon!