Wow, I'm in love with this plot and first chapter, it's very different than things I've previously read and I love your writing style. What's your update schedule like? See you next time xx

Off to a great start! Can't wait for chapter 2! Do you have a schedule for updating?

This sound like a great beginning. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

good start

Can't wait to read more!

This is really good, I look forward to reading more.

Looking forward to more

Welcome back! Excellent start. I'm really hooked and anticipating what he'll find when they reach New York.

I like how Edward smiled when Bella misunderstood him about the tripling of her salary to accompany him on the trip. Lol! That was cute.

Thank you for sharing:) Looking forward to your update! -RoseE. x

OMG so I wasn't seeing things.. I thought the title sounded familiar.. AWESOME! Also... welcome back :)

Thank you so very much for creating this story. I understand completely that real life happens and kids come first. I'm grateful you saved up for a new computer...
I'll continue to keep you all in my positive thoughts and prayers

Yea! You decided to post it.

Reads like it is going yo be very good

Very interesting can't wait for more Thank you .

Interesting start. Edward sounds like he is not okay with kids. Lol

Hope they become more than friends LOL! Thanks :)