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this is so good, how has it not blown up?

Hey,
thanks for the info. I really liked your story and am now looking into your original. Admittedly, I was very surprised you didn't turn it into an original sooner. Imo the story was the better part of 80% you. Congratulations. :)

It is included in Amazon Kindle. I hope you still get some form of compensation.

Otherwise: I couldn't find it on Amazon with the title you gave. Only with the Author name. I have found out why. It is written: "gray hours" on Amazon, instead of "grey hours".
In the book itself, it says "grey Hours" in the artwork, but in the text, it says "gray hours" again. Just as a heads up.
Best of luck. I look forward to more content. :)

This/the stuff said was definitely interesting, I’m excited to check it out! Not really good at wording, sorry.

i want to yell things like "sell out" and "what? no more?" but that would be completely hypocritical of me. i know id sell my stuff too if i could. im no where near as good as you are.
if you found a way to actually market your work here, the all i can honestly say is good luck and congratulations.

Ack, bittersweet.

I don't like to do this but I will be reporting you you're not allowed to promote your Original Stories on fanfiction fanfiction runs a completely different site for that this is not that site also I will not be reading your new story because how can I trust you to finish that story if you can't even finish this one

Super good.

I know it’s been a while since you worked on this but I greatly hope you return to it one day. I’m following it on every site you have posted. I love basically everything about this story but my heart especially goes out to Mimi (I refuse to use her cape name and the traumatic implications associated with it). I’m cheering so hard for her to overcome her powers drawbacks in the hope that years from now, people will talk about Mimi as people talk about Feral at present. Somebody heroic and worth aspiring to.

i . . . have never read a story like this. i think. its not bad. very locked into a single area. lots of characters that don't have alot of attention and what i have to assume are OCs. alot of OCs.

w...what? that's it?
I can't believe it ended here, it was so good!
I hope one day you continue writing anything, this was absolutely enthralling

People like this confuse me. On one hand they refuse to use their power very much, "privacy" and all that. And on the other they whine when they don't know how to use their power well enough to help someone. Practice makes perfect, lack of practice makes shit.
Thanks for writing, interesting so far.

I don't understand what's going on. You haven't given us (the readers) any explanation as to why Taylor is in an asylum. I've read two and a half chapters now and you still haven't given a flashback or even random thoughts of the MC remembering why she was there or how she ended up there.
I can understand going one chapter, perhaps two... but there's too many questions about Taylor's situation to ignore for longer than that. I'm not going to waste my time reading any more, just in the hopes that you'll reveal the reason eventually, especially since you should have revealed it immediately and not be beating around the bush like you have been. Denying essential information to your readers is not helping your story at all.

Well CRAP!

No!