|Reviews for Who Said Anything About Kids? NSFW TOWARDS END|
| Lifkies chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
Unfortunately I can't get very far into this, the huge block of text makes it very difficult to read... :s
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
A couple of suggestions to make the fic better:
• to put an emphasis on a word, use italics instead of capslock or extending vowels in the word
• always start a new paragraph when someone speaks, it makes it much easier for the reader to read and makes the fic look better
• multiple paragraphs look better but don't go overboard on them
• in relation to the smut, research by reading on archive of our own as the general quality on that site is better
• always have an editor check for spelling errors
See you next year
Garrett sent me, for I am Satan.
Look out for Foppe and Mo
| jayvonallen88 chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
| Chaney chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Great book 20/20 hey bae ️️
| Radius147 chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
Just as a note to the person that wanted ore, I have considered that. I most likely will. But since i hadn't planned this, i will be taking this original post, and splitting it into separate chapters. I will continue from there. Thank you for giving me this motivation!
| Star-Lord01 chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Great book 20/20. You go bae! ️️
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2017
Holy shit, you need to separate that huge ass mega paragraph!
| Anon chapter 1 . 1/26/2017
Aw! I was hoping you would continue this story. It's super cute and also wonderful. Great job!