|Reviews for Moriquendi|
| Seductive Lama chapter 9 . 1/22
Hmm, I think that the actual meeting of Legolas and Lady Rhinure should have been much, much more detailed. I feel as though the scene was anti-climatic. You should have incorporated Legolas's detailed observations of Lady Rhinure and, of course, first impressions.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
I would just like to say, thank you.
Thank you so much for writing this. It is truly one of the most beautiful pieces of fanfiction, or writing I have ever read.
| Baby doll chapter 33 . 1/1
This is such an intense chapter. You really get to see the intensity of the self control that an Avari must possess. You are so clever to introduce Morion as her uncle and then kill him off. All in all you made me cry. You are an excellent author :)
| pleasecontinue chapter 54 . 12/19/2013
I am very pleased with this story. I should have reviewed each chapter but I can't help myself from just blazing through each and every chapter. this story has truly captivated me. thank you!
| tiamaria40 chapter 35 . 9/27/2013
Dear author: I want to thank you not only for your dedication to your story; but for sharing your thoughts about the writing process. Having no talent for the skill I find your comments about the process so interesting. Your openness reveals a courageous nature. I love your honesty about your work. I thoroughly respect this achievement though sadly at this point I still dont like rhinure. I.m sure I will change my mind as I continue reading. As far as I.m concerned Legolas loves where I could not.
On to the story...again thanks for sharing your talents.
| tiamaria40 chapter 27 . 9/26/2013
Agree with it being too soon. This is how I imagined the wedding night. I don.t get the whole relationship yet. He doesn't.t want to be married or he does? How does he find anything admirable in someone so closed as rhinure? Is it the challenge? Sorry Im confused.
| tiamaria40 chapter 11 . 9/25/2013
Rhinure sounds creepy. Dark elves...yuk. still an interesting cast of characters. I'm shocked at how gentlemanly legolas is behaving. Good prince. I hope I start to see rhinure exhibit some honorable qualities. How do you pronounce the names?
| PaultheEwok chapter 54 . 8/30/2013
Awesome. Loved it. I do enjoy a good adventure/ romance story. And my favourite character from LotR is Legolas although I find all the elves interesting. Although I find most of the characters in LotR interesting. Part of the reason I can't read Harry Potter fics is because I don't find the characters that entangling, especially Harry. Anyway I like how you brought in the Moriquendi, they grew on me over the story. I like how you made them distant, even cold, but I like them and find them intriguing. I also liked how you made an intriguing love interest for Legolas rather than a typical Mary Sue character. I like Rhinure and think she's awesome. In fact I think one of the best love interests (really can't think of a more suitable word) in a story I've read. Although when are they (Legolas and Thranduill) going to find out who the lost ones are? Also while I was reading the last few chapters and Rhinure was thinking about her duty to the Avari, I thought now that she was married and said the four vows her duty would be to Legolas and she couldn't betray (not the right word) him? I did have other questions but I've forgotten them so I'll just say one of the best Legomances I've read. And looking forward to reading the next part.
| BrightGreenNails chapter 41 . 8/20/2013
If they're caught by some random passerby elf it is going to be so awkward... Just saying
| BrightGreenNails chapter 39 . 8/18/2013
Discrete cough? That's going to be embarrassing isn't it?
| BrightGreenNails chapter 36 . 8/17/2013
Wait, wait, wait, wait, WAIT! I've been meaning to ask: Who is Rhinure's mother? I would guess that it would be Legolas' mother but that would just be weird...
| BrightGreenNails chapter 23 . 8/17/2013
Awwwww, that's so sweet... I think. Great story, but it's a little painful for me to read a few parts of it...
| BrightGreenNails chapter 12 . 8/16/2013
Why would Legolas defend MINUAL!? I was deeply offended when she said that too... Even if I wasn't an avari or elf, it's offensive to me.
| BrightGreenNails chapter 7 . 8/16/2013
I am wondering if the wedding is a trap or not...
| BrightGreenNails chapter 6 . 8/16/2013
An AVARI!? That was unexpected...