|Reviews for Dark Half|
| BlackNightmareDragon chapter 2 . 11/5/2015
-cough cough- "Jack Merridew" from Lord of the Flies!
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 9 . 3/6/2015
Awesome ending to an awesome story. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful tale of yours with us readers.
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 8 . 3/6/2015
Aw! Very sweet ending to this chapter. I love it.
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 7 . 3/6/2015
Awesome chapter. I'm eager to read more.
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 6 . 3/5/2015
Despite how bad the situation was, I love how sweet Marty and Doc was after Doc won the fight with Jack. It was almost like Doc was actually Marty's father and he was comforting his son after being put through a hellish experience. I love it.
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 5 . 3/5/2015
All I can say is that Jack is truly sick in the head and needs to be locked up tightly forever. He's truly evil.
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 4 . 3/4/2015
Poor Marty and Doc. I hope someone, maybe Doc, finds Marty soon. I don't know how much longer he can stand to be tortured like this. The same goes for Doc too.
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 3 . 3/4/2015
Great chapter. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next with these characters, especially with Marty and Doc.
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 2 . 3/3/2015
Poor Marty. Can't wait to read more.
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
Interesting start to the story. I look forward to reading more soon.
| DrWhy chapter 9 . 1/30/2015
I love this story! The torture was seriously creepy... I only wish I could find even one other Hurt/Injured/Tortured!Marty fic... :(
| AstralWolf chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
Did you get Jack Merridew from Lord of the Flies?
| AstralWolf chapter 9 . 4/2/2014
Oh my god! Best BTTF fanfic ever! LOVE IT!
| Blake2020 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
| Isabelle L chapter 9 . 10/18/2013
Wow! Great story! Kind of dark, but still.5 stars!