|Reviews for Artificial|
| Delilah Draken chapter 4 . 12/21/2003
I like this story. Please write more soon.
Coraght gaght takt
| Blake Wales chapter 4 . 12/9/2003
Holy crap, dude. I can't begin to say how much I am fascinated with AI's and thinking machines - I'd like to write about them and all...
But you explore it as well as Asimov would have! Really - the though processes are revealed, and the story carries continuously. I am REALLY enjoying this!
If you're going where I think you're going with this fiction, don't take the cliché-ic route. This fiction is GREAT, and I'd love to read more (as long as its just as good as the last four chapters.) Keep up the professional work. _
| xeab chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
This just keeps getting better. Really really good. When I first read it was Chapters 1 and 2 only. 3 and 4 are great and seem to be going in a much more unpredictable and interesting direction. Really talented stuff. Now I'm hooked - I have no idea where this is going, but it is obvious you are talented enough to write quite a lot more to it.
| That Idiot chapter 4 . 11/12/2003
That is one hell of a funny end part...
Of course, it demands that more is written... _ It's too good for it to linger on...
| miles militis ab perditio chapter 4 . 11/11/2003
What is the relationship between Thomas and the
T-X unit? Is he more advanced or what?
Do update soon.
| dell chapter 4 . 11/9/2003
this is good! do continue writing..
| Cavana chapter 4 . 11/5/2003
Forgot something. Your character Lila doesn't fit the realistic makeup of someone who's a commander and living in essentially an "ultimate", or "last" war environment. In fact, she strikes me as an irresponsible, weak, loose airhead. The modern teenager. I don't mean to offend, just my opinion.
| Cavana chapter 4 . 11/4/2003
| That Idiot chapter 3 . 9/6/2003
I've been waiting, and i want more! MORE!
| raeble chapter 3 . 8/23/2003
OOh, this is good. I was really disappointed when I got to the end. I can't wait for the next part.
| davidfreeza chapter 3 . 8/11/2003
Wonderful. Your sense of the english language is amazing, and i have to commend you on your emmense vocabulary! I hope you continue very soon!
| Crest chapter 3 . 8/5/2003
End of Chapter 3 and huge disappointment because there isn't a Chapter 4 yet...
You have talent, please continue - and update soon *grin*
| Crest chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
Like WOW - I totally, completely like the idea, your writing style and the ominous thought that kept creeping inside my head that here is indeed an infiltration unit of perfect design... I hope I'm wrong, but wasn't that escape too easy? I guess a lot of locating devices can be put into a Terminator unit, eh?
Well, I'll be sure to read on - thanks for sharing this!
| Stone Cold chapter 3 . 7/31/2003
Wow. I would certainly like to see more of this one. Especially how John will react, seeing how he had a strong attachment to the T-800 before.
| Tinhamodic chapter 3 . 7/31/2003
Man! Why aren't more people reviewing this excellent story! This story is A-W-E-S-O-M-E! Your writing style is excellent! Love the descriptions! And the details, OMG! Love that 'Air Tom' bit in chapter 1! LOL! Love his analysis and his option of choices when he needed to make a decision! Surprising twist to have him meet Lila Connor first. One thing though was Tom privy to information concerning John Connor? If he was it would've been a nice touch when he met Lila or John alarm bells would be ringing in his head, knowing that the most wanted human by Skynet is within his power to 'Terminate'! LOL!
Anyway, enough rambling! Update soon, soon, SOON!