Reviews for Phantom of the Sea
Guest chapter 4 . 2/18
I wanna see Vlad as the mentor figure! I love your other fic so much and I think it would be cool:)))
ClassicCinnamon chapter 3 . 2/18
When I read the first chapter I was like 'ok cool I guess nice start but I want to see where this goes'. You did not disappoint!
TheSmilingRose chapter 5 . 2/1
Great chapter! I’m glad to see this updated! Keep up the good work!
AlecGateway chapter 5 . 1/31
Thank you so much ahhhh-
As always, the chapter was amazing! I can't wait for more!

Alec
Heart of the Demons chapter 5 . 1/27
The mermaid concept is very well utilized in this chapter. I thought it managed to give the characters something to worry about. I'd love to see said concept developed further.
KelseyAlicia chapter 5 . 1/26
excellent! Love it! You are bringing a smile to my face! It was awesome! I thought you never update! Even if it's so late I'm glad you did! I hope you update your other story soon as well! Love everything about it and hope Vlad makes an appearance soon! Can't wait for more! Goodnight and see you in the morning! love you, my friend!
KelseyAlicia chapter 3 . 1/22
on Amazon Music
"Under The Sea"

The seaweed is always greener
In somebody else's lake

You dream about going up there
But that is a big mistake

Just look at the world around you
Right here on the ocean floor

Such wonderful things surround you
What more is you looking for

Under the sea, under the sea
Darlin' it's better
Down where it's wetter
Take it from me

Up on the shore they work all day
Out in the sun they slave away

While we devotin'
Full time to floatin'
Under the sea

Come on

Down here all the fish is happy
As off through the waves they roll

The fish on the land ain't happy
They're sad 'cause they're in a bowl

But fish in the bowl is lucky
They're in for a worser fate

One day when the boss gets hungry
Guess who's gon' be on the plate (uh-oh)

Under the sea, under the sea
Nobody beats us
Fry us and eat us in fricassee

We what the land folks love to cook
Under the sea we off the hook

We got no troubles life is the bubbles

Under the sea, under the sea
Since life is sweet here
We got the beat here
Naturally

Even the sturgeon and the ray
They get the urge and start to play

We got the spirit
You got to hear it under the sea

The newt play the flute
The carp play the harp
The plaice play the bass
And they're sounding sharp
The bass play the brass
The chub play the tub
The fluke is the duke of soul

They ray he can play
He lings on the strings
The trout rockin' out
The blackfish she sings
The smelt and the sprat
They know where it's at
And oh that blowfish blow

Under the sea (under the sea)
Under the sea (under the sea)

Come on

Under the sea (under the sea)
Under the sea (under the sea)

When the sardine
Begin the beguine it's music to me

What do they got, a lot of sand
We got a hot crustacean band

Each little clam here
Know how to jam here
Under the sea

Each little slug here
Cuttin' a rug here
Under the sea

Each little snail here
Know how to wail here
That's why it's hotter under the water
Ya' we in luck here
Down in the muck here under the sea

There you see her
Sitting there across the way
She don't got a lot to say
But there's something about her
And you don't know why
But you're dying to try
You wanna kiss the girl.

Yes, you want her
Look at her, you know you do
It's possible she wants you too
There's one way to ask her
It don't take a word, not a single word
Go on and kiss the girl (kiss the girl)

Shalalalala
My oh my
Looks like the boy's too shy
Ain't gonna kiss the girl
Shalalalala
Ain't that sad
it's such a shame
Too bad, you're gonna miss the girl
go on and kiss the girl (kiss the girl)

Nows your moment
Floating in a blue lagoon
Boy, you better do it soon
No time will be better
She don't say a word
And she wont say a word
Until you kiss the girl (kiss the girl)

Shalalalala
My oh my
Looks like the boy's too shy
Ain't gonna kiss the girl
Shalalalala
Ain't that sad
it's such a shame
Too bad, you're gonna miss the girl

Shalalalala
Don't be scared
You better be prepared
Go on and kiss the girl
Shalalalala
Don't stop now
Don't try to hide it how
You wanna kiss the girl
Go on and kiss the girl
(kiss the girl)
(oh, ohnoo..)
(kiss the girl, kiss the girl)
Lalalala, Lalalala
Go on and kiss the girl
Lalalala, Lalalala
Go on and kiss the girl

Shalalalala
My oh myyyyy
Looks like the boy's too shy
Ain't gonna kiss the girl
Shalalalala
Ain't that sad
it's such a shame
Too bad, you're gonna miss the girl

Lalalala, Lalalala
(Go on and kiss the girl)
Go on and kiss that girl!
Lalalala, Lalalala
(Go on and kiss the girl)
Go on and kiss the girl
Kiss the girl
(Kiss the girl)
Go on and kiss the girl
KelseyAlicia chapter 2 . 1/22
Part Of Your World"

Look at this stuff
Isn't it neat?
Wouldn't you think my collection's complete?
Wouldn't you think I'm the girl
The girl who has everything?
Look at this trove
Treasures untold
How many wonders can one cavern hold?
Lookin' around here you'd think
(Sure) she's got everything

I've got gadgets and gizmos aplenty
I've got whozits and whatzits galore
(You want thingamabobs?
I got twenty)
But who cares?
No big deal
I want more

I wanna be where the people are
I wanna see
Wanna see 'em dancin'
Walkin' around on those
(Whad'ya call 'em?) oh - feet
Flippin' your fins you don't get too far
Legs are required for jumpin', dancin'
Strollin' along down a
(What's that word again?) street

Up where they walk
Up where they run
Up where they stay all day in the sun
Wanderin' free
Wish I could be
Part of your world

What would I give
If I could live
Outta these waters?
What would I pay
To spend a day
Warm on the sand?
Betcha on land
They understand
Bet they don't reprimand their daughters
Bright young women
Sick of swimmin'
Ready to stand

And I'm ready to know what the people know
Ask 'em my questions
And get some answers
What's a fire and why does it
(What's the word?) burn?

When's it my turn?
Wouldn't I love
Love to explore that shore up above?
Out of the sea
Wish I could be
Part of that world

Part of that world
Part of that world
(Arial you stop that right this minute)
Part of your world
Part of your world
(Your fathers going to be very angry with you now)

I wanna be where the people are
I wanna see
Wanna see 'em dancin'
Walkin' around on those
(Whad'ya call 'em?) oh - feet
Flippin' your fins you don't get too far
Legs are required for jumpin', dancin'
Strollin' along down a
(What's that word again?) street

Up where they walk
Up where they run
Up where they stay all day in the sun
Wanderin' free
Wish I could be
Part of your world
KelseyAlicia chapter 1 . 1/22
From a frozen parody

LYRICS:
The rain gleams fair through the nebulous air
Misty clouds hide every light
My spirit calls to the ocean
The horizon in my sight
The waves roll higher like this storming sea inside
Sorrow, anger, hurt
It's all too much to hide

Just keep it in, keep back the tears
Don't you remember those painful, flooded years?
Stay underneath, don't come up now
Well, I'm here now!

Let it flow, let it flow
Let the water run pure and clear
Let it flow, let it flow
Let the daylight disappear
I don't care if all the skies turn gray
Let the seas rage on
The rain never bothered me anyway

I always feared this power
Would sweep me off my feet
And this current I feel swirling
Would pull me in too deep

But now I'm through,
I've had enough
Unlock the floodgates and never close them up
So far away, but finally... I'm free!

Let it flow, let it flow
To the ocean, I belong
Let it flow, let it flow
Hear my siren song
Say goodbye
To staying dry
Let the seas rage on

My power roars and tempests rise but I won't drown
My hydrophilic heart is pumping fierce at thunder sound
I can't contain this aqua force so hear my pleas
To turn the tide is all I ask I'm begging on my knees

Let it flow, let it flow
And I'll start anew, at last,
Let it flow, let it flow
I'll wash away my past
No more rules, my heart I will obey
Let the seas rage ON!
The rain never bothered me anyway
Heart of the Demons chapter 4 . 1/6
Hey there. I just read up on all four chapter so far of your story, and I was quite literally blown away by how well you know the characters. I have Kelseyalicia to thank for introducing me to the story, for she herself is a great storyteller in her own right.
KelseyAlicia chapter 4 . 1/6
this would be cool if you updated and soon. you are an excellent writer and it's not good to leave good stories in a lurch or abandon! looking forward to more hopefully! Ever heard of the old Disney Channel Original Movie the 13th year? Funny how it's Danny's 14th year he becomes a Merboy!
TheSmilingRose chapter 4 . 11/12/2018
Oh my goodness! Yes! I love this AU when it’s written normally! Some people change the characters DRAMATICALLY and mess it up! Like they make it nasty and just... no. But this, THIS is sooo good! I love it! I’m so glad I found another good one! Thank you for making this story and I cannot wait until the next update! Have a nice day!
AKidWithAPen chapter 4 . 10/30/2018
Wow! I'm super duper excited for what's to come! I can honestly see Vlad as the classic villain character or the secretive mentor type in this story, though I'm sure whichever you pick will be awesome either way :]
(Thanks for the mention about my review)
AlecGateway chapter 4 . 10/30/2018
It's been quite a while, huh? I was starting to fear thw story wouldn't be continued... Just two days ago I thought about this story and how much I LOVED it! I'm so so glad you updated!
Thanks!

Alec
TimeZone13 chapter 4 . 10/29/2018
It's good to know this wonderful story hasn't been abandoned and as for Vlad what if he was a little of both. What I mean is what if he still likes Maddie and does petty little things to break her and Jack up, but he doesn't outright try to kill him, yet in a dangerous situation he doesn't put much effort in trying to save him unless he's trying to get maddie to see him as a hero or get Danny to trust him more. With him not trying to kill Jack, Danny would still be grissed out by the whole mom thing, but wouldn't be as against him as he is in the actual show. This means Danny is willing to go to him for help with a Mer problem, but not always as a first option...Anyways, sorry for the rant, that's just my opinion on the matter. I'm sure your story will still be amazing if you decide to do something different.
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