|Reviews for The Swallow and the Dragon|
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/20
| Hitmen101 chapter 11 . 2/18
Thanks for the chapter
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/7
Good story. Hoping for update
| Rebmul chapter 11 . 1/31
aw I cant wait for some more harry ciri fluff
| fireworks700 chapter 1 . 1/28
I like this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
While I mostly like the idea of this story, Harry is kind of a creepy level of obsessed with Ciri (at least up to the parts I remember reading). My problem is that he lets a few months dictate CENTURIES of his actions, which just seems beyond ridiculous. I understand maintaining the timeline and wanting to meet Ciri again, but he could have made at least one seperate life for himself in the meantime. Maybe getting together with a girl in southern Nilfgaard? It just seems a rather ludicrous level of devotion to what is basically a strong acquaintance.
I'd really like this fic, otherwise. Nice writing.
| G chapter 11 . 1/26
Thanks hope for more
| Intelligo chapter 3 . 1/26
More paragraphs. You have giant blocks of text that are tough to slog through.
Also vary your dialogue structure:
“Soandso,” she said.
“Yes and yes,” he said.
Is horribly boring and looks terrible.
Meaningless content but better structure for an example:
Daphne stomped her foot, “Harry you’re being an idiot!”
Harry frowned, mulling her words over. “You know, I don’t quite agree with that.”
“Well that just proves my point.”
When two characters are talking back and forth you don’t always have to indicate who’s speaking, it’s pretty obviously the other person.
Structural changes like these make things way better to read. They also are the mark of a more mature author.
| janderking chapter 11 . 1/24
Muito bom. Esperando por mais...
| GunSmoke2 chapter 11 . 1/23
Great story, can't wait for more.
| torvalds42 chapter 11 . 1/23
Thank you very much for the great chapter, and good luck for the next one !
| 96hanzo chapter 11 . 1/22
well this is a fine chapter. First time seeing harry getting nervous in this fic. Really cant wait for more. Take your time. A work of a master cant be rushed
| Ranmaleopard chapter 11 . 1/22
This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more
| Alex2909 chapter 11 . 1/22
wonder how harry stacks up against isadora and the unseen elders
| Ilireanwri chapter 11 . 1/22
I like this story. it's very good. I'm looking forward to the next update