| Reviews for The Swallow and the Dragon |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 9/23/2021 This end is such a dissapointment. You once again fell to the oldest error in the book and made the easiest to avoid mistake. You can‘t make Harry OP and have him Winn every fight, and then lose to some billy Willy sorcerer in a world where the pore power of spells is far weaker as in Harry Potter. Also, he has been way to intelligent to fall for this before, why couldn‘t he have thought of this now? This is a convenience nerf, something that only embarrasses the author writing it. This is dropped and I won‘t be reading anything written by this embarrassment of writing ever again |
 NegaDruid chapter 30 . 9/9/2021 Huh. Eskel and Triss... I like it. Eskel, for all his scar and everything, is as badass a Witcher as Geralt himself. There is a reason he has lived so long. He has had his own adventures and would probably be the most legendary Witcher alive if it wasn't for Geralt. So yeah... that is a nice thing. Beautiful story! I really enjoyed it! |
| chaoswizard chapter 30 . 8/18/2021 Good story keep more like this coming please |
| AlphaKenny1 chapter 12 . 8/8/2021 Calling Bullshit mate, he was torture by how late Ng when he was capture? You even wrote about the fucker cutting his head of but it healed before it even came out. So explained to me how the fuck he got a scar from a little bloody sword and didn't it heal in a matter of seconds? |
| Pato HM chapter 30 . 7/29/2021 Amazingly well written and a perfect final, I enjoyed reading it immensely. Thank you for your work. |
| Pheonex305 chapter 30 . 7/24/2021 I really enjoyed this story. It was definitely a great journey. Looking forward to reading your other stories. Makes me wish there were other harry potter and witcher crossovers. Great story again. |
| Rune Tobor chapter 30 . 7/15/2021 Well done! Thank you for writing and posting, sharing your time and effort. |
| Rune Tobor chapter 3 . 7/14/2021 He arrives in her past? There is a Game of Thrones(might be in Song of Ice and Fire section) where Harry arrives in the past and makes it so Daenerys Targaryen was never born. While I cannot remember the title or author I do know it is Harry and Luna. |
| Rune Tobor chapter 2 . 7/14/2021 Damn! I would have had Harry leave with Ciri. There cowardly, betraying, lazy, worthless wizzys deserve pain. Lots of pain. And they do not deserve Harry! In the fic THE BRITISH REFORMATION they get what they deserve. |
| Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 7/14/2021 I starting after you completed the fic. Went and Googled Witcher wiki for a bit of background. Just finished your Harry and Natasha, it is good. I especially liked Hogwarts Train vs Dragon! Both lost! |
| Mastersgtjames chapter 26 . 7/12/2021 Not sure why MC is surprised that he died, or that he came back from the dead. He has already repeatedly stated he could. |
| Mastersgtjames chapter 23 . 7/12/2021 Wonder if MC is gonna be starting up Magical Schools and businesses in his empire/kingdom? |
| Mastersgtjames chapter 22 . 7/12/2021 Can't MC heal Yennifer now that he has "caught up" with Ciri? |
| Mastersgtjames chapter 20 . 7/12/2021 With MC knowing how Portals work, and how Portals can be used to travel worlds, not just in-world. Just like Portal Gates are permanent versions... MC should have been able to travel back to earth this whole time. Even if only to confirm he was fine. |
| Mastersgtjames chapter 16 . 7/12/2021 Would be nice to see more utility magic in use. Like Maps of his lands that show the people in them. Like the Marauders map, but for cities and territories. |