Reviews for The Swallow and the Dragon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda wish MC had made more Wards for his Realms like he did with the Environmental Ward. Maybe some to enforce/monitor laws, things like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... MC not gonna start up his own magical school? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... No wards for anti-spying, for housework/convenience, for expansion charms so homes can be mansions inside while still being small outside? Seems a waste... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would have been happier if the MC had sorted through the debris of that Castle to make sure there were no records of the torture/experiments done on him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man... this reads like the MC is an idiot. I mean. really. I am not sure if I can even continue reading it. That ending was so beyond ridiculous. I HATE when a supposedly OP, Intelligent MC. Makes blatant obvious mistakes, or gets caught by their enemies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda wish MC were playing the game a bit more. Saving Ciri's family, her Grandma, etc... But using magic to make things APPEAR to happen as they would have. At least until time has caught up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... really annoyed. MC KNOWS how to use Wards. According to the the first chapters, well enough to hide/block the Wild Hunt. But apparently, he does not bother with it on his home, or his things, leading to people walking in on him sleeping or stealing his belongings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... Surprisingly upset that MC would erase his memories of how to make a philosophers stone. Seems dumb. I mean, I can imagine a LOT of situations where the MC might need/want one. Like for friends, lovers, significant others. Never mind its uses in alchemy and transmuting elements. Also bummed MC is not doing all his magic wandlessly. Hope he has mastered a lot of magic. I mean, construction magics, farming, Cursebreaking, Soul Magic, Sex Magic, Blood/Flesh Magic, Rituals, etc... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right... cuz apparently the MC doing what everyone wants/expects is "confronting" his fate. Would have made more sense to continue training and start fighting himself, instead of joining Dumbles, not training, and using stunners on the enemy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda bummed MC does not appear to be OP. Or that the MC used the last of his Elixir, and seeing as he is no alchemist, is unlikely to ever learn to make it on his own now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, after I recently was deeply disappointed with the Cyberpunk 2077, I started playing Witcher 3 again. Then I wanted to read some stories about our favourite Witcher... I found this gem, thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I would love an omake or extra scene where Ciri takes Harry back to visit his old world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() By the Gods! What an amazing Fanfiction! I don't have words to be able to describe it! I really hope there will be some sort of epilogue or sequel, even though there isn't one planned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Well written and a fun read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is pretty mediocre and alright to read if you want to disengage brain and waste an hour or two of time reading. The Kingdom building stuff is entertaining to read and it’s an easy bit of entertainment reading about Harry using magic to build cities and slowly conquer the Northern Kingdoms. However, Harry is such a fucking bitch it disgusts me. He is such a simp for Ciri it’s tragic the man literally lived for hundreds of years and abstained from relationships while being surrounded by women interested in him just to save himself for Ciri. He even has visions of Ciri getting close to other men during her travels but just watches on like some sort of cuck. Sure Ciri gave him the spark back in his life to fight and beat Voldemort but literally centuries nearly millennia has passed since she left his ass but he follows her around like some sort of lost puppy in the shadows watching her like some sort of cuckhold. It ruined Harry’s character completely. Not even going to mention the fact you made him a god practically and he still gets beaten by random unpowered people, other reviews have touched on that. |