Reviews for The Swallow and the Dragon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great loved it hope you continue writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I wonder if they could have kiddies? Even if they will die before their parents, it really awesome being a parent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this for us! Loved reading this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously? He gets enchanced senses from being a dragon yet he is knocked out by a hit to the head from behind? Why do people force these stupid plots on their readers? You have an OP Harry who will easily be able to remove any threat. No one would be surprised if he actually beats everyone. But you also need him to get captured for your plot. Is this really the way to do it? Disapointing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I played the game till about here a bit more |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been a very entertaining read so far. The 2nd chapter was a bit rushed & harry seemed OP, but I really like what you've done so far, with linking the 2 universes. |
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![]() ![]() I really do wish Harry had started empire building decades ago. Would have been hella fun to have all his shit set up and then as soon as Ciri leavez he cpuld just blitzkrieg the Northern Kingdoms. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work seen some of the other reviews hate them they can sod off please keep making good work |
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![]() ![]() holy fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ill never find a decent piece of fanfiction that is not canon rehash or absolute shittttttttttttttttttttttt fuck me in the arseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee EVERYTHING IS ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS PLEASE KILL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I HAVE CANCERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR SO MUCH FUCKING ASS CANT TAKE IT ANYMOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOOK TO THE LEFT AND ALL I SEE IS SOME DISGUSTING DRACO MALFOY GAY PORN FIC I LOOK TO THE RIGHT AND I SEE SOME SHIT 8BRAINED MACHOMAN HARRY FIC THIS IS TOO MUCH SHIT MAKE IT STOP |
![]() ![]() shitty writers getting too many fucking favorites ticks me the fuck off. this shit is garbage. fuck off man. these characters are not human beings. theyre braindead robots who communicate like dumbfuck children with mild autism |
![]() ![]() HAHAHAHAHAH i go to reviews and see chapter 8:Honestly this chapter felt a little bit forced, Harry's been basically untouchable since he arrived at this world and then some rando just comes up behind him and hits him over the head? Kinda felt unbelievable... LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO i fucken called it bruv, took me 30 seconds from my comment to reading that. you guys fucking suck at this shit. if yer gunna make a powerwank fic, let him rape all these shitters in the ass. stop with the bullshit reasoning to defeat him. yer making him giga powerful yet finding bullshit to bite him in the ass, when it shouldnt, at all. too fucken cringe. gonna jerk off to some naugty naughty megamatt09 fics. its so shit. end my life |
![]() ![]() this shit is ASS, holy FUCK. never seen such bullshit. my guy has a way to legit regrow limbs n shit, no scarring? yo mad eye look at this bull... how pissed is u HAHAHAHAH XD rekt nerd fateye booty. and now harry is mr chatty. how interesting. many things 2000 words in happen to be most convenient. cant wait to see how he eventually gets fucked by diabolus ex machina, despite already having 1800 plot holes and a secret vial of elixir of life LM FAO OOOOOOOOOOO. prolly has the hallows by now, though based on book5 . man you guys suck at this shit, give me a try and ill do better than all u fuckers. so much ass. i go on ao3 and its all gay shit. i go on ffn and its all powerwank. give me a fucken break man |
![]() ![]() ![]() while there were quite a number of small typos and such throughout this story, I have to admit the content was really good. Thank you for writing this, and what's more for posting it. After reading this fic, I might give the show another chance. |