Reviews for The Swallow and the Dragon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you know I had to google yenniefer and a stuffed unicorn, no answer so far :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nicely done. Loved how you integrated Harry into the Witcher world. You did a fine job bringing all of the characters to life and coming up with a very enjoyable story. Rather humorous having Harry waiting around for a century or so for Ceri to come back and in the meantime he establishes a base of power from which to help her when she does. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok this fanfic gave a lot of cringe for how stupidly powerful harry was but still this was very good and entertaining well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love? What he has for her is not love but obsession. Story would've been so much better had he somehow gone off with Ciri back in HP verse and not outright travel back in time and wait for her for a century and manipulate things for them to fall for each other, or her to fall for him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All those years and he hasn't had an inkling to practice wandless magic? Pretty interesting so far though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I wanted to say I really enjoyed the story so far. The story was easy to follow, and really captured my imagination in this combination of worlds. I liked the romantic subplot, and the twist with the ritual. And I just wanted to thank you for the work you put in. My own issues make it hard to stomach a lot of the recent moments that has Ciri being condescending to Harry, but I can recognize that their relationship could be considered normal. That it is my bad experiences that make my stomach sink when her first response to seeing someone who gave their life for them was to punch them in anger followed by a heartfelt thank you to someone else, or the little comments towards Harry meant to be at his expense as part of a joke that strikes a difficult chord in me. I know it’s probably me looking too far into the situation and seeing Harry accept that poor treatment as normal because he’s happy to finally be with the one he loved over a century ago, no matter how she treats him. While I can’t stomach to finish the story, I’m sure there are plenty of people without my experiences that color these probably normal moments with bitterness. And while I may not be able to finish the story; I can end the story on a happy note with how well the main plot wrapped itself up. Thank you again for such a well written crossover. |
![]() ![]() What did harry change exactly? an immortal psudeo yandere who had no purpose but wait for the perfect ciri who pussy whipped him in his time to come back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() verry well done author-san, amazingly written great ending too, just wished we could have a one shot of sorts of when they finally have litte mini me's running around or just some fluff or fan service! ill be waiting for your next harry/witcher story maybe make it harem? or not? or evil harry like battle tested war veteran cold harry who is in a final battle with voldemort in a apocalyptic world where winning dosent matter anymore something along those lines i guess, or maybe a more serious master of death?, anyway hope you keep safe on this pandemic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi great story definitly one of the best stories i have read. So good work and thank you for a great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, this was pretty good. The idea of Harry curling up and hibernating as a dragon for much of his time in Witcher-world was pretty amusing, and is a decent justification for why he hadn't emotionally aged/matured too far past Ciri. Thank you for the story. |
![]() ![]() I think this is the only witcher story I have seen that has actually been finished so thanks for that. |
![]() ![]() Thank you for having shared this story. I don't know a thing about the Witcher series and yet I managed to follow it till the end. So kudos to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for your hard work, and especially for finishing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. it was lacking in the action department for the majority of the story, but it was still an awesome read. even gave me an idea for a witcher story. I do have to tell you, that you did need quite a bit of transitional phrases like "meanwhile, with Harry..." because it was a tidbit confusing when reading the transitions. and the previous chapter's last transition had zero descriptions, so it took a second to determine what the heck was going on. I have a question for you, so pls do send me a message after you read this. I'd rather keep it in the DMs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It would be great to see a separate story about the future and see the son of Harry and Ciri |