Reviews for The Swallow and the Dragon
prinzjay1998 chapter 8 . 6/2/2024
I see. So that's why the author forced a capture into Harry. It's the only way he gets him out of the way so that canon can occur. It's kinda pathetic ngl. Why even introduce a foreign character into the canon if you're going to make said foreign character irrelevant? Your writing plus canon equals canon. Which means your writing has the value of zero because zero plus canon equals canon. Mathematically, your hundreds of thousands of words worth of writing only amounted to zero. Nothing. You wrote nothing. That's how useless a writer you are. Why even write?

Dropping this. Can't believe I wasted my time on what I thought would be a good read.
prinzjay1998 chapter 7 . 6/2/2024
Bruh. Wtf is this? Guy wasn't even a hard opponent for Harry that the latter needed all his attention. How can Harry not sense someone from behind him? Also, no automatic shield charm after centuries of study in magic? Wtf kind of writing is this?
prinzjay1998 chapter 6 . 6/2/2024
Ngl those are some very contrived reasons for Harry to not interfere with canon.
jiromanawari chapter 7 . 5/2/2024
are you telling me after centuries of living as a mage, he has not once learned about situational awareness? what the fuck is this
agyekumprince100 chapter 30 . 4/28/2024
That was beautiful
Vortozan chapter 30 . 3/31/2024
-_-, yet another masterpiece.
You can’t keep getting away with this!
xD thank you for the read! You’re a legend!
- Vortz
biob1 chapter 27 . 3/11/2024
We see a lot of ciri's aspect powers but we don't see a lot of harry's
l30rusty chapter 28 . 3/1/2024
its an amazing book and ive enjoyed the read but the last few chapters are kinda just filler
l30rusty chapter 26 . 3/1/2024
If someone treated me like that for saving there life id do everything i could to make their life a living hell
l30rusty chapter 26 . 3/1/2024
wouldn't of thought an abusive relationship between them full off surprises i guess
l30rusty chapter 11 . 2/27/2024
does harry bot know how to make portkeys?
Dhost chapter 6 . 2/22/2024
Too many time skips made me lose interest, not interested in dilf harry

not to mention he sounds pedantic with his overdetailed explanations whenever someone asks something, it's like the writer wants to explain something to us readers but instead of narrating it, someone has to ask and he has to answer to make the knowledge public
Namtekcor chapter 30 . 2/19/2024
You know I reread this story at least once a year and I enjoy it every time
Necromehanic chapter 21 . 2/16/2024
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Ashera fanfics chapter 30 . 1/20/2024
very good story. The technical part is a bit meh (lots of repetitions and some grammar issues), the "well, well, well" was a bit too frequent, but the story was interesting, the characters dynamic (acting more often than reacting) and overall it was a wild ride.
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