Reviews for The Swallow and the Dragon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i cant read anymore of this simp ass bitch. the potter family gets a vial of shit and this stupid bitch gives it to some nobody he just picked up from his woods? so if some hobo rapist druggy showed up shot in the woods harry would just give them that? fucking stupid shit. then hes anwsering question from this bitch when shes traspassing on his land. and hes serving her like a maid in his own home. fuck off |
![]() ![]() Could you make Harry Potter sound any more pathetic than you did? Interesting idea but your character is too sad and pathetic to enjoy reading. All I could think reading this chapter is could somebody just kill the idiot already? |
![]() ![]() Sounds kind of dumb to me. Only you can change your fate so don't be a slave to destiny. Isn't that what he was doing by staying away? Instead going back to Hogwarts and fighting Voldemort like people were trying to force him is somehow escaping his fate? Sounds assbackwards to me. aka as forcing the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOMEEEEEE absolutely loved the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() wowza |
![]() ![]() ![]() about time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope he dies then returns stronger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol unicorn toy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Owh Harry… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me va gustando mucho esta historia |
![]() ![]() ![]() Killllll |
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