are you going to finish this story ?

I think maybe rewriting a version without magic but still working on this one would be the best option. Keep the magic in for those who like it and another for those who don't

I was enjoying this story, I honestly though bella was going to become a shifter. The magic bit was not expected. I would read any change just like the beginning bit a lot so hope you keep wee liz. Thanks

Hey yep still reading you have been gone a while but glade to have you back. I enjoyed reading your story but only you as the author can say weather you think it needs to be changed are not. I look forward to what ever you decide.

OKAY! Twice now I've read that Bella put her daughter on her bed and sleep with her one month old in her bed. I don't know if your personally have children but it's unsafe to do so and at hospitals we tell patients not to co-sleep with babies. Many infants die this way. I thought you outta know.

I personally think you should work on this version the way it is, I personally really like.

I think you should start from scratch. Steal any ideas but try to some up with a new story, or have people help you plan something up. Trying to re start a story you have no passion with is impossibly hard. Let us know if you need help!

this story without magic... there was alot going on. it would be cool just to see the focus on Bella, Rose and the baby becoming a family

I was giving it a chance because of the baby idea, that was new, but there's no character development whatsoever or plot even.. it feels more like guidelines an not the actual story with the way it's written, nevermind the dialogues or lake there of.. but this chapter is just too much (not in a good way) to the point of not making any sense, so.. yeah, bye!

Wish there was more

Loving the story will there be more chapters soon

Please continue please

You honestly lost me here... And the powers stuff in the later chapters really really lost me... Shame cause it was Amazing till this point.

Oh yes, because cutting yourself in a house full of Vampires is just a brilliant move.

She was bitten, no one has removed the venom so why isn't Bella oh i dont know screaming as the fire spreads through her veins?