Cute n beautiful fic...is it done?

Oo what! update!

Very interesting the way that you connect past and present. I would like to see this continued.

Oh… wow! Good thing I read this after your revision. I'd have to say it's really nice. I like the way you pace out the scenes-alternating from present to past events. This just leaves a warm touch to the heart along with the curiosity as to how Fate will remind these two guys of the connection they shared as kids. And also the question as to how they became apart [?]. I really would like to read more of this so I hope you'll be updating soon!
Ganbarimasu yo!
sgo _

Oh, I like this! Very nice! _ Please do continue!

i really like that way you connect the past to the present. keep up the good work :)

this is so good! please update soon! onegai!

Aniki~! Finally, you updated! When will be the next chapters? _

Changed name, huh?