Reviews for SMASH: TAKE TWO
RedDragon30000 chapter 1 . 2/24/2017
To begin with, thanks for writing a sequel. As you knew, I was very interested to see what would happen next after the previous story, and you didn't disappoint.

It was interesting to see the situation that Sue has got herself in, and an indication that she had gone too far from the Headmaster's point of view. He is frustrated that he can't control her as well as he normally does, so suspends her for a week, thinking that she will calm enough to control again when she returns. Unfortunately, that isn't the case, and Sue is just as angry when she goes back to school.

As before, she is so angry that the Headmaster just can't hypnotise her, and she is just as on edge and unruly as before. Even though it seems she might keep herself in check, the sight of her opponent just outside the playground proves too much, and she is determined to make her pay. The little interlude between Sue and Ian was interesting, and shows how human the Prefects can act if they are not hypnotised as thoroughly. Unfortunately, even though Sue gets revenge on her opponent, she gets another suspension after smashing the Headmaster in the face again. She clearly cares enough about her Prefect status not to put it in danger, indicating that despite the low level of hypnotism, she is still loyal to the Headmaster.