If you rewrite canon, I would be very happy. Seeing people rehash the same plot is boring and disappointing, especially if they introduce new characters.

Until we meet again indeed….

i love this story so far, I hope to see it continued or adopted3

Chapter 5 was so hard to read in a way, the writing is good, no blatant grammer mistakes, and smooth to read but there are mistakes in my opinion but they are mostly minor.

Albedo is true to her character but she unlike what many think, wouldn’t explode in anger at the slightest of things. She’s to prone to anger in so many fanfics, this one included.

Ainz (Momonga) is not the type to think out loud, and if he does, he does it alone or unconsciously.

Ainz (Momonga) is seemingly more dumb, he isn’t a genius but he is not a dumb person, and he is very cautious, this fanfic makes him seem more reckless/dumb. Only some members of Nazarick would under almost all circumstances join Ainz Ooal Gown familia, not all of them, and even if they all do join Ainz Ooal Gown familia, they would not all join at the same time.

Pandoras Actor has a limited amount of transformations, he can’t doppelgänger Ganesha, and even if he could, Freya can still see his soul, and realize it’s not Ganesha. (Though she might not care, and keep the info.)

Strength: I don’t know if you are talking through Momonga’s when talking about levels such as level 2 (DANMACHI) being level 10-25 (Overlord), and level 5 being over level 60 (Overlord), and this is true information to you or not, and if you are making Aiz (Level 5, S rank stats) lose to Beta (Level 59, not a combat type). (She didn’t lose but you know it.)

My opinion:

DANMACHI: level 1 is Overlord level 1-10 (Bell does defeat a powerful minotaur but he’s the protagonist, and probably if I am recalling right has S-SSS rank stats, and was capable of defeating weaker level 2’s while being level 1)

DANMACHI: level 2 is Overlord level 11-20

DANMACHI: Level 3-4 is Overlord level 21-35

DANMACHI: Level 5 is Overlord level 30-50 (Aiz is definitely weaker than Beta even when Beta is not a true combat type but when Aiz levels up, and becomes level 6 with S rank stats, I believe Ainz could defeat Beta. In fact Aiz could probably defeat Beta with A rank stats while being level 6 but Beta equipment, spells, and weapon surpass Aiz)

DANMACHI: Level 6 is Overlord level 40-60

DANMACHI: Level 7 is Overlord level 55-70 (Ottar I believe is around level 60-70 combat stat wise in Overlord but without skills so the same Overlord player or npc would win but Ottar might have some powerful skills. The other levels are the same, I believe they are stat wise around those levels but are weaker due to not have a wide range of items, skills, and spells like Overlord characters, and their equipment is far stronger.)

DANMACHI: The Gods are an unknown in strength but since this is a fanfic crossover, you can make the gods range from level 70-100 in Overlord standards while some of them having unique abilities that can surpass tier 10 spells. They are also immortal in a way so it is harder to kill them, make it so that their souls have to be destroyed to kill them permanently or like in actual DANMACHI if I know my lore right, once their killed, they can’t come back to gekai even if they use their powers. Some of the gods can have abilities that are op, and can harm level 100 beings easily but are more glass cannon builds. (Overlord level 100 player, and npcs are usually solid in all stats, and are not glass cannons, key word usually. DANMACHI gods can be glass cannons, most of them.)

Also this was not canon but Artemis arrow can destroy the lower world, I personally think BS, and that the gods are not mythological versions of themselves, I also believe there besides Tenkai (Heaven) there is only 1 world, being the lower world, and considering how many op gods there are, the world should easily be wiped out by a rogue god. I do think the gods are strong enough to destroy cities though, and create miracles though with some limits depending on what type of gods they are. (They may even be op but with many restrictions on them due to their nature)

Since this is a fanfic, you can make the gods what I said above unless you have your own ideas.

DANMACHI: The One Eyed Black Dragon escaped from the dungeon with 2 others, and as such the dungeon should be far more dangerous than one might originally think. So many DANMACHI & Overlord crossover fanfics with Nazarik make the Dunegon seem like a cake walk but much of the dungeon is an unknown. The dungeon might be sentient, and creates black disasters such as the OEBD to fight against the gods when it senses them in their territory. (You can search it up) As such, the disasters like the OEBD should be around level 70-100.

Many of the DANMACHI character can exceed what they seemingly are stuck at, for example have op skills with seemingly infinite power such as Betes skill to grow stronger the more angry he is with no limit to how strong he can get. Bell also can dish out at powerful attack probably capable of killing a level 50 while being level 3 in DANMACHI albeit after charging up a long time.

I have a question, why is Momonga so determined to believe he's in a game? I mean, canon Momonga was sure he wasn't in the game after he Fiddled with albedo. Because there's no way the game suddenly jumped child safety Ratings. Then there's the fact he can smell and taste, not really taste, but smell and feel the air and stuff like that. The game could only get the bigger details, so like... A blunt sense of touch. or the temperature in the room. But nothing as close to real as the blow of a fan or the hot air coming from your lips. Most of these things he should have experienced and you can't just say the game was updated because this isn't a console game. It won't just update the game file but you'll need to update your hardware. Like he would need to change from a simple headset to like a full body dive. Which do exist in Yggdrasil, but he doesn't have one. Overall, this doesn't affect the story, which is really good, but is kind of annoying.

OH MY GOD I AM DEVASTATEDDDDD THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY BUT MY HEART DROPPED WHEN I SAW LAST UPDATED WAS 2018hope hope hope you willl continue the story!

It’s unfortunate this seems to be abandoned, it was one of the best overlord fics I’ve read in a while. A whole lot of fun, definitely recommend it

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Bruh, Ainz is an idiot... just say you were lost in thought...

Man, quit hating on PA so much Ainz. Accept your creation for how you made him.

Poor Ganesha lol

Bell is such a horrible MC. No wonder I stopped watching the anime after season 2. God, he's frustrating.

rip

This story so good. I am sad that it’s been dropped but even if all you have is some draft or half baked next chapter can you release it? Would just like to know where everything was going.

update?