Reviews for Fragmented
Guest chapter 62 . 11/22/2024
I loved this great and emotional story, thank you very much for writing and sharing it.
Daneu chapter 62 . 11/1/2023
Awwuh, so good! Really enjoyed this story! The ending was great too. I am curious as to some small scenes in the future how they work, live and heal together, but maybe left to the imagination, haha
Liseron chapter 62 . 8/18/2023
Loved the story thank you!
Guest chapter 62 . 2/25/2023
Thank you for sharing this great and emotional story. I enjoyed it very much.
One-True-Czarina chapter 62 . 2/1/2023
Amazing! LOVED that they finally got a happy ending. Very sweet and hopeful.
Guest chapter 62 . 12/30/2021
Oh man, this has been an absolute joy to read! I found this story when chapter 27 came out, and I’ve been hooked ever since! Honestly, this has been something I come to after a week of stress and work. It’s been something I’ve looked forward to reading, and something that’s helped push me forwards. I’m sad to see it end, but I’m so, so satisfied with its ending! This story has been all I’ve ever wanted in an Alex Rider story, and has quickly become my favourite Alex Rider fanfic, if not one of my favourite fanfics all together. I’ll definitely come back to re-read this story in the future.

Thank you for putting your time and effort into this story. I’m always enamoured by how much knowledge and dedication this fic radiates. It made me excited to be a reader. In a way, your characters have somehow become a part of me. I love them all and I’m so happy with their endings (or maybe it’s really their beginnings. I think I like that better).

All in all, it’s been a pleasure reading this story. Thanks for taking us on this journey with you! I’m looking forward to reading more of your future works (no pressure though!). Happy late Christmas and early New Years!

And, as always, thanks for sharing and hope all is well!
Wraith and Demjin chapter 62 . 12/27/2021
This has been amazing! The ending was so perfect and I cannot tell you how glad I am that everyone is alive and back together! Thank you for all the chapters of this story! I have had so much fun reading them! Merry belated Christmas! :)
gms1976 chapter 62 . 12/27/2021
I'm sitting here kinda sad right now because I've followed this story for a long time, and I'm not entirely sure what to do about the hole that its completion going to leave behind. I came across this amazingly brilliant story when you were around 30 chapters or so in, and I was instantly addicted. I watched as Alex went through hell and you peeled away every layer of the onion with relish. The top highlight of my week was having a new chapter to read and I am going to miss that little twist of excitement so much.
You drew me in and pulled me along for the adventure and I can vividly see all the safe houses, Raab's chateau and Clyde's hidden lab in my head. I loved it when Nico and the boys got involved and their turbulent first few days together were so much fun to read. Especially when they realized Alex has no self-preservation instincts.
I just had so much fun reading everything you wrote and in a time when there is so much stress in the world, you gave me a place to send my mind - to escape from it all and that is worth more than gold.
So thank you - thank you for every word and every chapter! Thank you for taking me on the adventure of a lifetime. I will await - with breathless anticipation - your next Alex Rider adventure.
Guest chapter 62 . 12/26/2021
Wow this was an amazing story! I found it around chapter 50, binged the whole thing in a night (and paid the price), then was stunned to find you still updating! This was the first fanfic I’ve actually been around for its completion. I would get so excited any time there was an update. You’re a gifted writer; good at keeping a schedule and good at crafting a story. Thanks for the great read and I look forward to your next works! \ (••) /
Asilrettor chapter 62 . 12/25/2021
Amazing story. I love being there for the conclusion of an amazing story like this one.
Guest chapter 61 . 12/20/2021
I am so happy right now! I’m so glad the gang is all back together and that their end (or maybe it’s their beginning) can finally starting being peaceful, or at least safe!

This has been a joy to read. I’m sad to see it go, but thank you for sharing your story with us. Can’t wait to read the final chapter. Hope the holidays treat you well!
Asilrettor chapter 61 . 12/19/2021
I’m teary eyed about it as well.
This has been such a great fanfic. I’ve loved finding it had been updated recently. It will be really sad when it’s all over
3A07 chapter 61 . 12/19/2021
I am so happy! Looking forward to nextchapter
Guest chapter 60 . 12/18/2021
This chapter was hard to read, but very profound.

I can’t even begin to imagine the guilt Nico is feeling, but I can definitely see how finding out his unit mates are still alive would effect him. Sure, there’s relief and maybe even happiness, but deep down there’s also betrayal. Because, even if the reason for leaving Nico out of the loop was sound, it still hurts. I suppose it’s sort of relatable to Alex, in a way. I believe he thought everyone in the unit to be dead at some point, too.

All in all, I enjoyed this chapter. You were right in saying that Nico’s POV was needed. Can’t wait until they’re all under the same roof again! Thanks for sharing. Hope all is well.
otterpineapple06 chapter 60 . 12/11/2021
Yay extra bonus christmas chapter! That is absolutely heartbreaking! I love it it's beautiful poor bby you'll have your team back home soon
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