Reviews for Fragmented |
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![]() ![]() Loved it! Glad everyone’s okay (relatively speaking) and I can’t wait until they’re all together again! Thanks for the update. Hope all is well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg they got alex back im crying this is so cute and about bloody time tbh! I love it as always |
![]() ![]() Ahhh! Poor Alex! Poor Mickey! Poor everyone, honestly. I really enjoyed this chapter. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Glad they successfully made it back, although I’m hoping Mickey turns out alright. I honestly can’t predict what’s next in store for Alex. Hopefully some peace and quiet, although not sure how long that’ll last! Thanks for sharing. Hope all is well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! So glad they made it out of there! Ben's back and I hope Mickey survives! Loving this new chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no too short! Love this story! The Alex you have written is very good and unique! Please continue soon! |
![]() ![]() Ahhhh oh my goodness. I was on my seat the whole time. And such a cliffhanger too! I’ve seriously enjoyed reading this so far. Can’t imagine how Alex is feeling — hopefully he and Mickey successfully escape this time. I know Mickey was shot, but I’m holding out on the hope that he’s not dead. Same with the other members of the unit. They’ve grown on me. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing and hope all is well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooo. These last couple chapters have been intense! Mickey alive! And now maybe dead again. The rest of the unit supposedly dead. Escape! So exciting! Thanks for the updates! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah . Mind blown right now It’s very frustrating not having emojis, just imagine them please. Loved this chapter. I’m getting so excited. I keep thinking I’ll save each chapter as it comes out so I can read it all in one go… but I don’t have that self control. Great chapterthumbs up emoji** |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg omg omg I really want Alex to get out! But this is so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just reviewed over on AO3, but I couldn't resist coming here too. My heart is bouncing out my chest right now. I really hope the next chapter comes soon because I might have an aneurysm waiting to long! Dang! Amazing writing! |
![]() ![]() Reread this again because it’s awesome. Can’t wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Oh gosh, the cliffhanger! I really want to know what happens next. It’s definitely saddening to see Alex lose hope and Mickey thinking his unit is dead. I enjoyed this chapter being from Mickey’s POV though. I always thought Mickey and Alex were sort of distant towards one another — or maybe passive? But now that I think about it, I think the reason for that is that maybe they’re too similar. To alike one another. So maybe they find it hard to relate to each other to an extent? However backwards that might sound. On the other hand, I like seeing their bond slowly form and strengthen. You’ve got me excited for what’s yet to come. I’m rooting for them! Thanks for sharing. Hope all is well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! I had stopped reading for a few months, but I'm all caught up now and I'm so sad I have to wait to read the rest of it. Damn! Seriously, it's really good and I still love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was genius because it kinda gave a minor refresher of why no one is coming and seeing things from Mickey's perspective was a great addition to the story. Hard to see Alex give up because of Clyde's drugs, but he's never down for long. I loved seeing Mickey - who we never saw as paternal when the group was together - taking care of Alex. I really want to know how they are going to get out of there. Where's Ben, Nico, Cameron and Jacobs? I hope they come soon. We haven't really heard from Nico since the explosion. Awesome, awesome chapter! Loved it. Keep it coming! |
![]() ![]() I really hope they get out because I feel bad for Alex and Mickey now and it would be really cool if they outsmarted their captors, I love your books and when you update you make my day. This is one if the best stories I have read on fanfiction and it has such a cool plot, please please please don’t discontinue this book it is really sad when people do and your book is just too good. |