| Reviews for Fragmented |
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   gms1976 chapter 52 . 8/29/2021 First off - another chapter! Best Sunday gift ever! Second off - Well shit! Now we're finding out more about who's in charge and they're even more ruthless than Raab. Dammit, Ben, where are you? Arghhhhh! The suspense is just killing me! Did MI6 get the uploads? Where are Cameron, Nico and co? How the hell is he going to get out of this... More please! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| otterpineapple06 chapter 52 . 8/29/2021 NOOOOOO! I was so excited for Ben to save Alex and now I'm sad. The poor boy has been through so muchNo but for real this is a brilliant chapter |
| Asilrettor chapter 51 . 8/18/2021 This is a great chapter… I love the unexpected twist with Maria. Wow I also really feel for Alex, he’s coming quite close to the end of what he can handle alone |
| gms1976 chapter 51 . 8/17/2021 Daaaamn! I LOVED this chapter! Never would have predicted Maria! Nice! Woo hoo! Can't wait for the next part! |
| otterpineapple06 chapter 51 . 8/17/2021 Omg fox is back! Doubt they'll manage to get there without any trouble no matter how much I want Alex to collapse into fox's arms and for him to look after Alex forever and keep him safe from all the evils hunting for himalso Maria seems like a badass and I love her. Can't wait for the reunion of Alex and fox! (hopefully at least) |
| gms1976 chapter 50 . 8/8/2021 Yes! Another chapter! I'm dying to know what Alex's plan is and whether Cameron and the guys are going to find them. Is MI6 getting his uploads...the suspense is just killing me! Great writing! |
| Asilrettor chapter 50 . 8/7/2021 Wow, I can really feel the desperation |
| Wraith and Demjin chapter 49 . 8/3/2021 of course the video stops recording... NO! Rider bad luck. This chapter was so good! I really hope that someone is seeing Alex's transmissions (though I'm guessing yes...) Thanks for the update! :) |
| Wraith and Demjin chapter 48 . 8/3/2021 Oh wow... All the little pieces are beginning to come together; I'm excited to see what effects Alex's actions will have on everyone else! |
| Wraith and Demjin chapter 47 . 8/3/2021 Ooooooo! This is getting intense! Excited to see what is coming up next! |
| Wraith and Demjin chapter 46 . 8/3/2021 Oh my, Alex... You sure are testing fate here... Thanks for the update! this was really good! :) |
| gms1976 chapter 49 . 7/18/2021 Woo hoo! New chapter. Excellent writing, as always! Soooo, they were experimenting - testing to see if the implant worked - potentially impacting world governments, bringing the globe to its knees. Great storyline - never would have guessed! Geez, I was counting down with Alex and nearly had a stroke when the screen died! Such a good story! Totally made my day to get another chapter! Thank you! |
| One-True-Czarina chapter 48 . 7/13/2021 Amazing story as always. I am excited to see what you have planned for Alex next. please update soon! I can't wait! |
| DodgyReptile chapter 33 . 7/12/2021 This is becoming very interesting, could Smithers be the mole? Could of Jones set the entire thing up? Will he go to Canada or go to Asia? I will not know till I read on |
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/12/2021 Why do you need forgiveness, we aren’t like the English fans whenever it went to Rome and not home |