I loved the way you portrayed Snape. The subtle insults, the light jabs...It was beautiful. You rock...

Is very nice

Oh. No.

Great story, thanks for sharing!

how come he can use magic outside school? he got himself expelled for the same reason in cannon.

ok, so it's pre-ootp then, but no gift from sirius?

and why no one is blaming him, including harry? has he even apologize about sending him to the dursleys at the first place? poor harry indeed. so all these training is for finishing old tommy boy, what happens after that? bet no one is even thinking about him to survive

funny that it is he who controled, and still controls his life. after this and all he thinks is not to cuddle...what a sick bastard. to him, harry's just a tool, no more than those broken toy soldiers in his cupboard. i know this was written way before hbp not to mention dh, but i can't stop thinking he of all people should know better about breaking point. no one wants another ariana right?

I wonder when the timeline? seeing remus not knowing the vision is it pre ootp? but what about sirius?

how did he managed to accio clothes if he don't have a wand?

Hi!
This is was a really interesting story. I really enjoyed reading this. You did great at writing.
While reading, I was quite surprised at Snape and what he told Voldemort at the meetings of Harry. Some of it were felt quite risky, when other students like Draco could report something else, like Harry being actually quite confident and well adjusted. But it payed back in the end.
I am very glad that Snape doesn't have to live with the guilt over Harry's blindness. He did an excellent job with Harry with his training.

This was great. I’m really sad it ended because I definitely could have kept reading I was so hooked. The plot and character development was great. The only thing that bothered me when reading was sometimes you incorrectly used or skipped a wordsomething that could easily be fixed by a betaso occasionally I was confused by what you were trying to say. But otherwise I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for your effort

Okay wowwwww. Wowww. Wowww. This is amazing! Wonderful. I luv this sooo much

Good job so far

What about Voldemort? Things aren’t remotely finished, you haven’t cleared up the danger.