|Reviews for The Sacrificed Disciple|
| ZyleBV chapter 31 . 3/16
Please update soon
I really love it ️
I'm so excited for when Sasuke and Naruto will be born
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/16
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/13
I've really tried enjoying this story, but the chapters are very... how do I put this? They read like they are a jumbled mess. There's only a vague notion of direction and it's annoying, frustrating as fuck.
I can understand why a SI story with that many words written has such a low ranking.
I'm gonna drop this story here.
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/13
The childishness is super off-putting.
| KianJunko chapter 1 . 1/21
Hey! I just wanted to thank you for this amazing story and wish you well and thank you for existing! I am inspired and awed by this piece of art and I thank you for gifting such amazing writing to this website. I can’t believe I get to enjoy this fanfic for free, revisit it whenever, I think many readers take it for granted. I hope you have an amazing year :D
| Guest chapter 31 . 12/25/2022
Awesome story! Thank you for sharing
| Red's Melancholy chapter 1 . 10/11/2022
Good looks on the warning on the first chapter! I wish more authors did that lol Some may like it, but to me, 30 chapters/200k words in and the mc is still 6 years old isn't slow burn, that's time stop lmaoo
| Lyfus chapter 31 . 9/9/2022
Really enjoyed reading the chapter! Is the danger an ambush from Root?
| mtkicks chapter 1 . 8/18/2022
this is great. hope you update soon.
| imAwonder chapter 31 . 7/12/2022
Waaah ~ this is amazing, super invested in the story and the characters Love this. Great writing. Looking forward for more KUDOS much️️️
| jaybay23911 chapter 31 . 7/3/2022
Please doo continue writing, this a fantastic read, and I'm loving every moment of it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2022
Isn’t it literally explained that the special chakra produced in the brain that activates the sharingan is fueled on negative emotions
| SweetAssassin19 chapter 31 . 6/28/2022
This is one of the best SI stories. It's flowing nicely eith the development and storyline. It's following canon to a certain point while also going its own way. I like how the character is shown getting stronger with natural struggles instead of an overly OP kid that is suddenly jonin level. They're a prodigy due to their mental age and stronger that those their age but they'd still struggle under a seasoned chunin and join, it's good cause that shows they'll be OP when they're older and it would make sense. I like how the character isn't trying to change every event like stop obito from dying or spilling their secret to a random person so quickly, everything this character does makes sense. I'm curious to see if you'd have them save narutos parents or the uchiha clan or not, cause is be conflicted also since it would heavily impact the future and tbh the future needs to happen since things that happen in Shippuden also happen in boruto so sasuke and naruto need to be OP. I love your explanation of jutsus and character details, it goes more in depth than the anime, I love when fanfics do that. Thats how I expect an SI to be, it would give more details than the anime since it's now a real world. Can't wait for the next update!
| SweetAssassin19 chapter 1 . 6/27/2022
Wow brilliant first chapter. Especially towards the end where you further explained the sharingan and tobiramas flawed thinking of uchihas. I love it when authors go above and beyond when it comes to details like these. Thats a great way to describe uchihas and their sharingan, I never thought of them as a curse, just misunderstood.
| getalife1000 chapter 3 . 6/18/2022
Mehh you missed the chance to use your cuteness so that if Obito kills you, atleast he'd feel mega guilty when it hits him out of spite Asu ! Even if I love that hoe. But fuck what it means to be a shinobi if it means dying, it's like a cult.
Wait, isn't it a cult? Now that I think of it.