Reviews for The Sacrificed Disciple
Child of Dreams chapter 20 . 6/3
Did you just kill Izumo?
Guest chapter 31 . 5/4
Hope we get a new chapter. Its one of my favourite stories.
Dekiru Grindelwald chapter 5 . 3/28
Why are Naruto fanfiction writers so adamant on making their main character weak crybabies. Like you know you can write a good fanfiction without your mc crying every moment like a cuck it's so fucking annoying
Gabriel31 chapter 31 . 9/25/2023
Nice. it's nice. I'll admit, the MC's behavior at the start was an annoyance and it pissed me off. He acted childish, something that itachi should do as the mc surpasses him in the mental aspect. Yet he doesn't, choosing to be babied and treated like a foolish child by his brother and parents and basically everyone around him, while itachi, the real four year old suffered to his clan and training to protect him. The mc knows this, and yet does nothing, leaving someone who he's older than mentally to suffer for him while he enjoys his life.

The mc doesn't like that, yet does nothing about it, choosing to keep getting babied and treated carefully and enjoying his life while itachi goes through hell. The mc has grown in that time, of course, and I like his character now. Only thing that pissed me off is his adamant with sticking to plot. All in all, it was a good read, and any future reader should try it out. Don't listen to the comments and if you get annoyed with the mc personality at the start, push through till mc gets his first d rank. After that he turns more serious and the story gets more enjoyable.
Guest chapter 31 . 6/23/2023
I have read a lot of fanfiction about the Narutoverse, most of the time I dont finish them,this one was the best I have read in a long time, I hope one day you would write again, it does not have to be imediate but as long as you have not giving up on it, since it is such a amazing story:)
KingOfEmptyness chapter 11 . 6/24/2023
isn't itachi supposed to find his Susano's weapons here or something the yama mirror that reflects attacks and the drunk sword that seals all bullshit to a drunken world.
ryuschnitzel chapter 1 . 6/18/2023
*reads descriptioninteresting"
*reads the warning6 years old at 31chapter and going 200k deep? yeah no"
Toebang chapter 31 . 4/21/2023
Good long story, bad short review.

Thanks for writing,
~Toebang
ZyleBV chapter 31 . 3/16/2023
Please update soon
I really love it ️
I'm so excited for when Sasuke and Naruto will be born
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2023
Actualizar!
KianJunko chapter 1 . 1/21/2023
Hey! I just wanted to thank you for this amazing story and wish you well and thank you for existing! I am inspired and awed by this piece of art and I thank you for gifting such amazing writing to this website. I can’t believe I get to enjoy this fanfic for free, revisit it whenever, I think many readers take it for granted. I hope you have an amazing year :D
Guest chapter 31 . 12/25/2022
Awesome story! Thank you for sharing
Red's Melancholy chapter 1 . 10/11/2022
Good looks on the warning on the first chapter! I wish more authors did that lol Some may like it, but to me, 30 chapters/200k words in and the mc is still 6 years old isn't slow burn, that's time stop lmaoo
Lyfus chapter 31 . 9/9/2022
Really enjoyed reading the chapter! Is the danger an ambush from Root?
mtkicks chapter 1 . 8/18/2022
this is great. hope you update soon.
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