Reviews for Burden of Lies
lancecomwar chapter 14 . 2/6/2018
Niiiiiiice continuation

I was going to suggest that I’m pretty sure Gohan is too powerful for the dragon to change things about but I doubt Videl will continue with that line of thought to the conclusion considering this twist

Was pretty sure Goten was going to mention that his big brother Gohan talked about Videl and that he was right in saying she was pretty. But I think the way you handled it was good. Hope next chapter we get Goten remembering her as the girl his brother brother played superhero with and Goten and trunks arguing about the coolness of Saiyaman
Kaflaful chapter 14 . 2/6/2018
So well done. I really can’t wait for you to finish this. These cliff hangers you’re leaving us on are actually painful though. Please hurry!
uklem chapter 14 . 2/6/2018
YEAAA! You're back.
Thanks for not abandoning this awesome story.
ashlovesdbz chapter 14 . 2/6/2018
Glad you didn’t give up on this story, things are starting to pick up! I can’t wait for the next chapter, excited to see how Videl reacts to Gohan being related to Goten! Update soon ;)
Aaron Leach chapter 14 . 2/6/2018
Awesome chapter.
iMysticalDBZ chapter 2 . 2/5/2018
Dying for another chapter!
Anon chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
Really well written, hope you update soon!
TheBurgerSnatcher chapter 1 . 2/1/2018
Wow, I'm impressed. This is probably the best Gohan/Videl story I have ever read, and I've read a lot. I normally don't leave reviews, but I needed to this time. Please continue with this story. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Once again, excellent work.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/22/2018
Please continue this story, it's awesome!
iMysticalDBZ chapter 4 . 1/22/2018
Needs an update (I know I’m on wrong chapter lol)
NoGoodLyingSaiya chapter 13 . 1/20/2018
Here's a review to help bump this story up in that metric and get more people to read this.

At the rate we're going right now, Gohan will be the one apologizing to Videl and thanking Mr. Satan, not the other way around.
tabriggs1975 chapter 13 . 1/18/2018
Please update soon. I really enjoy this story
Sndwitch chapter 13 . 1/3/2018
more please.
iMysticalDBZ chapter 8 . 12/27/2017
Checking every day for a new chapter. Addicted lol
kclinda chapter 13 . 12/19/2017
it gets better and better! Keep up with the good work!
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