Reviews for Burden of Lies
SeanHicks4 chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Interesting start, looking forward to seeing how Videl reacts to Tien and his "trick" knowledge.
ChufoMaster chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
This is a really nice start! I like the idea on how you brought Tien into this! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
BlankingOut chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
The story seems really interesting thus far... I like the idea of bringing Tien(a character I like very much) in especially he is often the one being forgotten about. So I'll follow this story. Keep up the good work!
Luke chapter 1 . 2/4/2017
Okay, I am liking where this is going (and how well it is written!).
Avo385 chapter 1 . 2/4/2017
This is a really good start. I will follow for now, might favorite in the future. Anyway, I get the feeling that Tien, who probably doesn't know about Gohan going to school, is going to mention him. If he does, the can of worms is going to be opened.
Does Videl not remember that Tien was at the Cell Games, or are you having it that he never showed up on the camera so no one knows in the first place?
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