Reviews for Hadrian Black: The Other Twin
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
This is and awesone first chapter.
Yagura's Sensei chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
Love the chapter cant wait for what comes next XD
anarion87 chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
nice so far
sRxAfrikaner chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
NightWing1325 chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
I like it so far and really enjoy Doreas personality. And while harems seem to always fit because of the lordships I think anything over 4 kinda ruins it. I would love to see Fleur though
howmanyisthat chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Well I like it. Hope you continue
magitech chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Certainly a different start.

Dorea is completely correct about Dumbles, he doesn't lead, instead he hides information, tells half truths/lies and sends you off to be slaughtered while he fights like mad behind the scenes to save his precious 'bad boys'.

I like the pairings and the possible future ones except Granger. Can't stand the overpraised bully and if anyone is a spy for Dumbles it's her. Always found it unbelievable how a muggle born had so much in depth knowledge of the wizarding world the moment we saw her in first year. She knows more than magical raised, isn't that suspicious.

Some of the less used girls would be refreshing. The Patil twins give Harry a Raven and a Gryff to go with the Puff and Slyth.
Lord Lovegood chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Very first chapter. I especially like the portrayal of James' mother. I personally support the harem pairing.
Pietro99 chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Excellent start, well done.
The Edible Scump chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Cool start.
Syk chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
The names Harry and Hadrian are not related to each other. You might as well named Engelbert. It is as related to Harry as Hadrian is.
Ordinarily Prudent chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Looks promising. I am glad that you picked it up, even with the changes the premise has a lot of potential.
Scarred Seeker chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
It's a good chapter setting things up to be a great story. Love the ideas and the pace of the story. Thanks for sharing this and hope to be reading more soon.
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