|Reviews for Defense Against You|
| Chia89 chapter 21 . 3/18/2007
evil. yeah evil
but great, yes evil but great
hm, e-v-i-l such a good word evil
evil evil great great
i love two words
| Chia89 chapter 19 . 3/18/2007
Patience is a virtue, but i dont have patience. so im glad that in this great chapter some ginny and draco action appears
| Chia89 chapter 18 . 3/18/2007
oh, you are so right
tom felton looks adorably cute in "Anna and the king"
i love this movie (for 3 days in tv [german])and i love tom felton
such a cute guy *giggle*
| Chia89 chapter 16 . 3/18/2007
here comes the word i love:
| Chia89 chapter 15 . 3/18/2007
imagine a girl sitting in font of her pc and died...of laughter
| Chia89 chapter 12 . 3/18/2007
ohh, poor gin
derek the asshole shame on him
ginny and draco forever .
| Chia89 chapter 11 . 3/18/2007
| Chia89 chapter 10 . 3/18/2007
such a cute chapter
damn hermione, i hoped for a kiss, but no she must interrupt them
( is the spelling of interrupt correct? sorry when not, i know my englisch isnt so good)
| Chia89 chapter 6 . 3/18/2007
chapters 2 - 6
| Chia89 chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
such a good chapter and i can use my favourite word for it:
| G. Malfoy chapter 30 . 9/7/2006
Excellent. It was very cute. You did a good job on this story.
| CK chapter 28 . 9/4/2006
nice. colin rules for that. also, you should totally get a beta to edit your stories.
| CK chapter 27 . 9/4/2006
your english is a wee bit rusty, but I think you are a native speaker. you just get verb tenses and some other tricky things mixed up in kind of an awkward way. the story was so good, however, that I didn't notice it much.
ooh, french. I picked up a lot of french in my younger days! I'm not a native speaker, but here goes:
that's magnificent: c'est magnifique OR if I'm wrong, cela magnifique.
yes ma'am: oui madame. I dont know the word "ma' suis" but it might work just as well. "oui mademoiselle" works a bit better.
I love you: Je t'aime
And I love you too: Et je t'aime aussi
And Twyla Isaacs is a strange french name, but I'll go with it.
Slight errors aside, good story. A tad dramatic and a little odd. I wonder how the equivalent of a high school graduate could go on to teach the people who are, for the most part, their peers? That always seemed off, but for the sake of the story, it works. sort of. I did enjoy reading it, but those were my small nitpicks.
| Arriette chapter 21 . 8/26/2006
Oh i sort of guessed but never knew for sure
| Luvnikki chapter 14 . 7/26/2006
This chapter was a little bit chessy but verly well written. :)