Reviews for All the Dead Lie Down
Hers Jr chapter 23 . 8/14/2021
In about six days, it would have been over a year since the last updated chapter. I truly want to know how this story ends and what Clementine did that would upset Amelia back at the ski lodge.
Hers Jr chapter 19 . 12/27/2020
Good story. Especially with Clementine doing something bad but how bad can it really be? Hope to find out soon after the Knives Out chapter. Also, maybe Amelia would say she forgives by saying I love you cause we should hear more of that between these two sisters. Keep at it, ForeseeObstacles! :)
Hers Jr chapter 3 . 12/16/2020
This is beautiful. Fierce protective sister, Amelia, would have been a great guardian for Clementine. I love your story. Please finish it, you gifted genius.
Hers Jr chapter 16 . 12/7/2020
Your character, Amelia, is astonishing. I really hope you don't do to her what Telltale did to Lee. But I trust that you'll do better. Good work!
Hers Jr chapter 15 . 12/7/2020
I'm loving every bit of this. Good work!
Hersson jr chapter 11 . 12/6/2020
I'm rereading this cause damn its good. They should have given Clementine a sister that survived with her and the immunity thing? Epic! Keep at it cause it's beautiful!
Hersson Handler chapter 22 . 12/6/2020
I love it. Keep at it, you gifted writer, you!
Hersson Jr chapter 23 . 12/5/2020
Your story is amazing and its got me hooked. I really do hope you continue this because I never seen such a dramatic on how deep the love between a bigger sister and Clementine can be until I found your story. You are by far the best story teller in the walking dead game fanfiction I've encounter.

P.S: Kill Arvo. Thanks!
PunctuationPoint chapter 23 . 9/10/2020
Took me a while to get the time to finish reading this chapter, but man oh man I wish I'd done it sooner. Am I going to compliment your stream-of-thoughts method of writing for the millionth time in a row? You betcha! It's *chef's kiss* splendid.

Okay, time to talk about plot!

Starting off the chapter with Amelia and Carlos, I genuinely am very worried about her health. The part where brain damage gets brought up and both the character and the story reels at that fact is genuinely fantastic. Great scene.

Carver is still a scary motherfucker, and seeing him go toe-to-toe with Silent Amy was a sight to see (read).

Also been wondering for the longest time if Jane would show up in this story, and here she is! I super look forward to her dynamic with Amelia, as the sister who left her younger sister behind. Gonna be super cool.

Then we get to Nate the Great, who will more than likely dry up Howe's alcohol supply very quickly. Also a fun scene to read - honestly, you integrate Amelia and the reintroduced canons so well that it feels natural as fuck. You need several clap emojis for that.

And then we get to Nick. This one genuinely put a smile on my face despite Amelia's 'let's just get bit again to see how much I can take' moment. Always love seeing those two in a scene, it's good stuff.

Alright, summing up, another fantastic chapter, and with a herd on the way, things are gonna get spicy here real soon.
thedaikaijumorph chapter 23 . 8/22/2020
Holy sh*t.

Not only is this a great chapter to your story, not only is this a glorious return to this beautifully-written piece, but this is easily my favorite chapter of the bunch for one BIG reason.

Jane, my favorite character in the entire Walking Dead franchise (and I say this with Rick Grimes, Daryl Dixon, Maggie, Michonne, Carl, etc. in mind) has entered the chat, and I couldn’t be happier.

She may have gotten the Alien 3 treatment in Season 3, but at least in the world of fan fiction written by brilliant minds such as yours, she lives on. Can’t wait to see more of her.

Great stuff, ForeseeIbstacles. Can’t wait to see what transpires next.
thesameoldfearsx chapter 23 . 8/21/2020
So glad to see this updated, great chapter! :)
PunctuationPoint chapter 22 . 8/15/2019
Well shit, ForeseeObstacles is alive, and I can't be happier. It's really been a minute since the last chapter, huh? Nevertheless, it's good to see you back! And, with a really dope chapter :D God, where to begin with this one?

Having Lilly around makes for some definite awesome moments; I really enjoyed her additions to the truck scene at the beginning, showing how her and Kenny still don't see eye-to-eye (obviously), and how she tries to tell Amelia not to pull out the IV in a backhanded insult-compliment-thingymajig kinda way. Nick's development is super interesting too, interested to see where he's gonna go from here.

Then the crew arrive at Howe's, only for Amelia to get separated and hauled off by Nate. Definitely found myself worrying about what was being planned here, and after totally forgetting about the fact that Carver now knew about Amelia's immunity, seeing everyone brought together by the truck and the following walker bite was a huge 'what the fuck' moment, and I loved it. This whole scene onward is really great, to be honest.

Then we get to Amelia and Lilly being locked up in the truck together. Super cool dialogue here, and it's interesting to see how their dynamic plays out in complete isolation from everyone else, including the fact that, well, y'know, Amelia is bitten and stuff. Sorta puts a wrench into making amends, aye? xD Still, cool scenes, and I enjoyed the details of how Amelia takes the hatchet, and Lilly takes it back in her sleep. No trust, smh.

And Amelia avoided eating AK-47 ammunition, thank God. I hear those give you indigestion.

To sum up, fantastic chapter, a few minor punctuation errors here and there, but didn't detract from the overall experience. I'll keep harping about this in every review, but your stream-of-thoughts method of writing is still super sick, and is why you're easily on the top of my favorite writers list. Keep doing what you're doing.

OH, and reading this finally got me out of my writing slump to write some more of my new project, so thanks a million for that :D Not a lot of good TWD content to get inspiration from anymore, so it's always nice when an author I like posts. Helps get the creative juices flowin'.
thedaikaijumorph chapter 22 . 8/14/2019
Glad to see this story still going!

Can’t wait to see what happens next!
emaegx chapter 22 . 8/14/2019
you have no idea how happy i was when i saw the notification update ! I’m so happy you’ve updatedThank you for putting so much effort and imagination into your stories ! First off, I loveeee the showdown between Nick and Kenny, especially when he stood up to Kenny for Amelia’s sake. I love how the others called him out for his shit being put on Clem and Amelia. Carver making Amelia get bit ! such an intense and cool ass idea, for a second I thought she would probably turn from it, I also liked how Lily had her back against Troy from when she woke up. I cannot wait to see the denial and look on Carvers face when she proves him wrong, as well as the looks from Nick and ClemPleaseee update soon can’t wait for the next chapter
thedaikaijumorph chapter 18 . 4/30/2019
Holy f**k f**king f**kity f**k, this was quite a chapter! I barely even know where to begin!

To start, Lilly’s comeback caught me off guard. It was written in such a way (one that actually tricked me quite a bit) that I didn’t see it coming at all. And that fight that ensued?

That battle put Clem and Lilly’s final fight in “Broken Toys” to shame! And it had to be broken up by both Kenny’s group AND the cabin survivors!

Speaking of Kenny- holy shit did his character get to shine in a new light in this one! While he still retains his stubborn, somewhat self-righteous nature, this chapter saw him develop in a way only the BEST writers can write. Just when I thought this chapter would foreshadow the bitter, broken liability he becomes in Season 2, suddenly he up and has a genuine, VERY well-written conversation with Amelia where he compares the mistakes he and Lilly made, and how he openly ADMITS his faults in the part he played of turning Lilly into who she is, and that if he could find redemption, why not her too?

THIS is unique, original, and truly interesting. Instead of completely focusing on Lilly as a force of pure evil with little to no interesting aspects, as many fans (and, unfortunately, the fourth game) make her out to be, this story shows something entirely different. And the fact that it’s KENNY of all people who’s trying to give her a shot at redemption is saying something!

Plus, the reasons for him thinking in such a way are written realistically and and feel believable. I’m super intrigued to see where this goes!

Before I depart, I’m gonna drop a little something. Not a criticism of this story, mind you, but simply a criticism of the game itself.

Wellington is a real place. And it’s not in Michigan. It’s a large village in Ohio.

Which does raise a question: if so many people told Clem and Amelia it’s in f**king WISCONSIN... ... many people exist out there that haven’t done any research?

... ... ...maybe the human race DID go nearly extinct because of utter stupidity!

Nevertheless, it’s 5:00 this morning and the sun is on the rise. Goodnight, sleep tight, don’t let the walkers bite, and remember:


Do that shit! It ain’t useless in the apocalypse like everyone says it is!
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