Reviews for Another Age, Another Adventure
WPG chapter 9 . 10/19/2017
cant wait for next chapter
Oracle-sama chapter 9 . 10/19/2017
it's totally babidi making a move right now.
Guest chapter 9 . 10/17/2017
So Cell doing Spirit Bomb this way will be Gokus/Gohans inspiration?
TheRangerBoy chapter 9 . 10/17/2017
I'm curious if Zangya will be returning after the arc.

It's not common that she returns, and it gives me the same vibe as when Goku fights alongside Piccolo.

I mean... most forgo even mentioning her existence...
Sid89 chapter 9 . 10/17/2017
Well this was quite a long chapter. It felt very out of character for Gohan to watch the 2 groups squabble amongst themselves, and only grew even more outlandish as Cooler and Frieza simply conversed with Gohan until the arm wrestling had determined a victor. However, the one glaring issue I saw this chapter was Bojack's power.

Gohan powered up to his maximum, but couldn't break free of him because of leverage? Gohan FAR exceeds his power and could simply pry his arms off of him by stretching them out. That Zangya revenge scene could have used a lot more planning; it's obvious that was the reason for having Bojack manage to subdue Gohan, but it completely ruined the immersion in the combat.

It will be interesting to see how Goku and Pikkon will fare against Janemba in the morphed Otherworld. Without the aide of Vegeta, I imagine Goku is just about on Death's door. Speaking of Vegeta, I wonder when you plan on him entering the battle as well.

You've got some good ideas, but I think you need to plan them out a bit more. You could have just as easily shown Zangya's disloyalty by having her intercept a blast that was intended for Gohan, without ruining the flow of the battle. Other than the Ginyu and Zangya scenes, this chapter was very well done. Your fights were very vivid and the depictions of the desolate city were top notch. I like your original idea of the empty pockets Gohan feels around Earth due to the warping of reality. And the barrier between the realm of Hell and the living reminds me of the way Super 17 played out in GT. Looking forward to the next chapter.
inFamousSlyMonkey chapter 9 . 10/17/2017
AWESOME, I can't wait for more.

The Ginyu Force/Cooler Squadron scene was funny. Wish Gohan had used the opportunity to get information from Frieza and Cooler before they realised who he was, though Gohan probably couldn't imagine that enemies that weak (compared to him) could be a problem.
sharingankakashi007 chapter 9 . 10/17/2017
This situation seems bad very very bad
Goku where are ya
Help from the other side...
Right now Gohan pretty much can't do much against them
Videl finally learned the truth huh!
Wonder if she'll actually believe it
She's been in a denial for a long time
Next chapter should be amazing
Hope this doesn't end in tragedy...
Guest chapter 9 . 10/17/2017
gohan is 2 cocky, he should've killed everyone instantly, instead he's letting ginyu and armored squad play games to fight him and now he's going to pay for his stupidity.
Guest chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
I think its pretty easy to know who is the one making his move. Its the and only, our CHAMPION, our SAVIOR, MR. SATAAAAAN!
ssjash chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
great work. can't wait for next chapter
icecreamguy chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
Definitely worth it. Great chapter!
Calewelt chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
Great and well written chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Keep it up!
bizarrecoyote chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
Awww man, here we go! A 'tingle' down Gohan's back, huh? Sounds like he's knocking on the door to Super Saiyan again, possibly even jumping straight to SS2.

My guess is that it's either Videl or Sharpner going to do something suicidally stupid, especially after hearing Cell. After all, he already has the other villains in his 'sight', and doesn't know that his classmates are here...
thedarkpirateking chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
Re-Wright2390 chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
Irrationally Angry? Babidi, Bibidi, or are we getting into Time Breaker territory with Towa mind manipulation?
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