This was a very much enjoyable read. But too bad it’s unfinished/abandoned TT

This is excellent. Just binged the whole thing and am awaiting the next chapter.

Come Back PLEASE I BEG OF YOU!

Hooray! I read this story a long time ago and am quite glad to see it updated. I enjoyed the new chapter and can't wait for next time.

I don't like this chapter very much, but what can you do.

Great story, please update!

It’s been interesting to watch your writing style evolve and grow over the past 7 years. This chapter was leaps and bounds ahead of even the last chapter, let alone all the others. Congrats, can’t wait for the next one.

I think that this chapter is perfect. The soulmate ritual is quite restricted but very interesting. I like you gave them hope for coming back together.
Thank you for writing this wonderfull story and sharing with us.

Wow, great intro with unexpected ending of chapter.
Thank you for writing it.

ahhhh! we need another chapter!

oh percy percy you are too reliant and focused on riptide and thinking shit going to go the same way... riptide doesn't belong to you percy it never did if it did it from this universe explanation wouldnt hurt you even if another used it , if they had so much money why take the bus again? i mean why not the train?

percy you got complacent and too reliant on riptide so he going to meek then hmm? by not wanting to show his hand he will not fight and when people learn about his skill and strength it will turn them against him they will think he lied and held back cause he thought he was better then them battle of the tsunderes yandere ding ding ...oh percy poor percy now he got BO that really kills and it way you say things in your head more..enchanted swords or not it wiser to think such in your head not out loud coral brain. he relying on his knowledge to much ...he thinks it will all be the same even though he been shown proof it wont. why doesnt he learn to dual wield? he would truly be more like the sea then...so is this goign to be a thor mjonr storm breaker type thing? where he lust after one blade upseting and pissing off the other? plus he did just get told only the swords true owner can wield it safely...take the hint percy riptide arent yours...Poseidon didnt give you a gift he gave you stolen property your dad given you a few things percy so now he kills ARES? has to steal back what was stolen and what? his mom saves herself? .. why do i get the feeling the sword hiding a crap ton of tricks?

interesting
your not using your brain percy it will happen again you cant help but run your mouth or do something 12 year old you wouldnt do or know. you got cocky you got complacent and the cost your mother died, Sloopy percy Sloopy

huh...why didnt he use the rain? i mean it a storm it rains his dad the stormbringer why not use it for a little boost? why not throw riptide and have it uncap in motion and stab the neman lion mouth.

so since he got there earlier and his scent no doubt stronger it brought a stronger monster. plus in the first book we see the loon is hunted by the hunters so clearly they picked it trail up here or in the area...or last the trail it got to percy here. but percy was later in canon so minotaur came along.

I'm literally begging, please update this. Please please! I've been waiting!