Me fascina esta historia, la trama es interesante y los guiños y crossovers que hiciste a otras series le dan un toque magnífico, no alteras la personalidad y actitudes de los personajes (o al menos no tanto) y ciertamente eso me encanta en los fanfictions, aunque hay menos momentos de markapoo de los que esperaba es entendible, puesto que la trama se centra más en Seraph. Pero hay algo que no me termina de convencer del todo, y es que Marco, al enterarse de lo de Erebus, no buscara aumentar su poder, el haber ganado el torneo de Wukong le pudo dar seguridad en sus habilidades, pero realmente creí que trataría de volverse más fuerte aprendiendo a usar en su totalidad su Key Sword con el oráculo, las verdaderas capacidades de esa arma me tienen realmente intrigado, ya que le hizo un daño real a Erebus y (aunque Marco no se dio cuenta al principio) todos parecen verla como un objeto extremadamente poderoso, si no se ha abandonado esta historia, espero que abarquen ese tema en un futuro.

Renfield was a great movie in my opinion

in your universe is adventure Time just star vs the forces of evil but after magic goes away I wonder if I'm getting this weird timeline correct Gunther crash lands on Earth after being struck down by the king of Mars like 20 years past and the story of star and Marco happen then considering everything we see in adventure Time from ice King like 50 years later maybe the world goes through world war 3 and basically just skips world war four into the Great mushroom war where the governments of the world find residual magic and uses it to enhance nuclear bombs to the point that one country makes a bomb so powerful it blows a hole in the planet causing mass of a station and extinction of the human race and then Earth with the mixture of mythological monsters from sorry versus the force of evil and mutates the world into something that resembles adventure Timeand I don't know if you actually connected this this way but even after the Canon ending of star versus the forces of evil there was magic left specifically Marco had a battery that transferred all electricity into magical energy star uses it to charge her wand like twice in the show)

they are in love like that ride or die type stuff she took seeds from a few flowers he gave her on their first date and made a whole field of them on purpose that's a new level of dedication if they don't end up together I'm going to cry

If the author gets to the butterfly trap arc, it may help for the Magic High Commission to talk about their past actions and wonder if Eclipsa and the monsters are really the problem. It might also help for Marco to teach Hekapoo about American history.

Este capítulo me dejó más dudas que certezas. El personaje chesire es todo un misterio. Pero sus intenciones de ayudarlas son sinceras. Y parece que tiene los conocimientos para hacerlo. Solo resta saber si será capaz de lograrlo.
Nuevamente viejos enemigos de hekapoo vienen a vengarse. Y estos seres parecen muy peligrosos. Veremos si son capaces de derrotarlos. Gran capítulo, nos vemos y cuídate mucho.

Wasn't expecting that ending!

It appears that a lot of females in Marco's school feel attracted to him when they see him be fatherly because it makes him seem like someone who would be a good parent if they were to have kids with him. Parental qualities are one of the most ubiquitously attractive traits someone can have.

I like fics.

It was amazing. In the last chapter, the first reaction was the Borg, but something more frightening.

Not a great enemy to fight on a good day. Doubly so when you're as late to the party as they are. At the very least, they've got a target and a goal. Hopefully, they can fix things before they're too late!

Good work!

As always, cool job here.

Keep the good writing.

So a hive mind situation.

excellent work on this chapter

nice update