Hermosa

Me alegro lo de la familia Astrea fue inesperado

This was beautiful it touched me a lot

God this chapter was heartbreaking you dared to kill Reinhard god tears came to my eyes how cruel that was

My God this was unexpected it left me in wow

This is my first comment. I found this story through another writer who also writes something similar, but I loved the way you're writing the story; it's fun.

Bro. im begging you. throw this shit through chatgpt of something and ask it to fix your grammar. im half tempted to do it myself and repost it. im eyes are melting along side my brain.

Next chapter when?

the luck degrenation make sense, because there no way subaru luck is that horible in the canon without him being cursed by someone

So I read your story and, I’ll admit it’s okay but I feel like some scenes kinda drag on and the plot points are getting to me. Not to mention I’m just going to be blunt the grammar is…wow dude.

Anyway Arron, it’s cool that you depicted him as that. A human, but at this point after the shit he went through I kinda expected him to mature at this point, like he has to realize that he might not leave and the world is a piece of shit.

It’s good, but kinda needs some refinement.

I need that next chapter

I hope this great story is updated at some point.

I just have a few things to say.

1- It's stupid how he keeps bothering me about "returning home", sure, I can understand that, but since he doesn't even have his original appearance anymore, there are only 3 possible scenarios. First, he disappeared, his family is looking for him, that's what he thinks. However, considering that he doesn't have his original appearance anymore, nor his original body, since he's a Humanoid Red Dragon (Saber's Description), then there are only 2 possibilities left, he died in his original world, and his soul merged with Arthur Pendragon Prototype's body and traveled to the world of Re:Zero. The other possibility would be that our protagonist is Arthur Pendragon Prototype's body, with Aaron Wilson's (MC) copied memories embedded in it, meaning he only believes he's Aaron Wilson (Like the spider girl anime), while the real Aaron Wilson keeps living his life normally in his original world, like the protagonist of Overlord in a nutshell. Of course, I'm not the author, so I don't know what he decided, there could be other "clichés" out there that I don't know about that explain his situation, but, my point is, since his appearance and BODY have already changed, it's useless to worry about returning to his world. Or what?; Is he going to return with his body that can cross the sound barrier just by running with his legs?, and wait for nobody to discover him?, I'm sorry, Aaron Wilson is too much of an idiot to be so smart and think so much, since he spends his time taking pictures of the world of Re:Zero and the characters (Selfie with Rem); For what purpose?, TO SHOW THEM TO HIS FAMILY AND FRIENDS!, he said it himself, so yes, just with that he will be discovered, and it will become like Arifureta the thing, where when returning to their world in Arifureta, they had to go to other worlds because everyone was trying to capture and study them; What?; Was that because Hajime is useless even though he is so strong? It was that, or kill everyone to deter them, which a normal person couldn't do, and then the other option, run away forever with their families in tow, because even though they are strong, their family is not, same case for Aaron Wilson's family.

2- Putting Chulthu here was fucking stupid and absolutely STUPID, even more doing it this way where the timelines aren't destroyed, What?; Keeping Emilia alive as the last hope for that timeline by leaving her the Excalibur?; And having the ignorance to CLAIM that that is hope?, since Chulthu appeared that world WENT TO SHIT, THERE IS NO hope, WHAT'S MORE, that Excalibur IS NOT EVEN THE PROTO, IT IS NOT EVEN THE SWORD MADE TO SAVE THE WORLD!, it's just the normal/castrated version that belongs to Artoria, it IS NOT Arthur's Excalibur Proto, honestly, I highly doubt that even the Excalibur Proto can do anything against Chulthu...

And finally, continuing with the same complaint that bringing Chulthu into the story is fucking stupid, why? Because leaving aside that it is VERY dangerous, since not even Return by Death SHOULD be able to save you from meeting Chulthu, leaving aside the fact that you might not die and become his eternal slave (you don't die, so you can't use Return by Death), and that even if you managed to use it, there's a chance it might NOT WORK, (Yeeeep, SURPRISE, time manipulation is not a difficult thing for Chulthu and all his verse), and lastly what did the author do, which is the stupidest thing, in this case he attacked him both physically and mentally, and even straight TO HIS SOUL, we all know that this guy, Aaron Wilson, is not EVEN CLOSE as inhumanly tough as Subaru, and even Subaru would be left with his mind broken, LIKE A VEGETABLE, after that experience, for a reason they are the pinnacle of terror, but no, Aaron Wilson put up with it...

this has no tension so far

Sometimes I wish we saw Gilgamesh in a competent re:zero fic