Reviews for Marvel's Maelstrom |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, Clint dying had me crying |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, I'm feeling so bad for Natasha and Naruto at this point. They both obviously love each other and want to be together, but Naruto is afraid of forgiving her, and she also can't forgive herself.. It's really tragic... Really great story! Still have a bad feeling about the dumbassery I am sure Bruce and Tony will get up to with the Mind Stone... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Giving Tony the Mind Stone is probably the most moronic thing you've written... The story has been really great, and I'd like to think that this was just a weak moment. Kinda sad since it ruins like 90% of the character development you've done with Naruto so far... Kurama should really be the MC at this point, and Naruto should really start listening, especially since Kurama has been right 99% of the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() T'is was a pretty good chapter. Should have just let T'Challa get his revenge though. Having the villain off himself almost made me feel bad for him |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit, the Daki tale was wicked! I've always loved African tribal tales and Dilemmas. You did really well there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really cool chapter. Loved the Bible excerpt. That was really fitting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did not cry. Stop lying! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang, I feel so bad for Naruto right now. Man just can't catch a break. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get why people are complaining. I love how you have allowed his circumstances to shape his growth and personality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't really say anything bad about his handling of Amora... He might have changed some, but he is still a good person. He also might have seen some of Haku in how she is basically Loki's tool |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know... I really don't like villains who keep coming back, especially when their backgrounds don't interest me. The story is still interesting though, so I'll definitely keep reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello guys , i have a question, i 've got few ideas about crossover fanfictions and i hope that some writer adopt my ideas, cause i'm not very good at writing , where do i post my ideas to get adopted by someone ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t mind you using kang but you kind of make him seem stupid he has genius level intellect and wouldn’t do this to “test” naruto its such a dumb thing to do. Instead he should’ve showed up in later chapters slowly with hints until the reveal |
![]() ![]() this chapter is let down. short and fast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo number of issues so far. Not to say I dislike the fic as a whole or anything stupid like that. If I did I wouldn’t read it. Firstly…. Naruto has been nerfed to hell and back…. Like this dude is MUCH faster than anyone except maybe quicksilver in the MCU. Secondly this is more a question than anything else why are you making him so pussy whipped….. you are adding weakness that isn’t there and taking strengths and then buffing his enemies. Heck of all people Naruto should know how deadly a kinoichi is why would he let SO many women get so close to him…. Heck he comes from a world where some female Shinobi where POISON LIPSTICK TO KISS PEOPLE TO DEATH! |