Reviews for Once Upon Another Time
Lrsgreenleaf chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
This is such a great idea. As a stand alone story it makes sense. After all it is from the view of a Harry that ceases to exist...by choice.
H Harmon chapter 1 . 9/8/2019
My review is almost identical to the one I just did for “The Time Traveller.” This is a beautiful first chapter. I would like to read a second that sums up the changes that were made. Thank You.
peggy77 chapter 1 . 9/5/2019
I can completely understand why you didn't continue this because I have read A Marauder's Plan a few times and love that story. But this is also a great start to a time travel story, too.

You are a very good writer.
Renny236 chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
This was indeed an intriguing start. Off to read A Marauder’s Plan.
christinemarie13 chapter 1 . 8/16/2019
Another one-shot I wish had just a little more but I understand how it could be a bit repetitive after A Marauder’s Plan.
Zile0 chapter 1 . 7/25/2019
Loved this! Going to read A Marauder’s Plan next.
madie080802 chapter 1 . 7/23/2019
Bravo! Great storytelling.

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tec4cleveland chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
There's no greater gift a writer can give than to leave his/her readers craving more. You need to continue this ... if only to show us AFWBD's reaction to the Harry who no longer dances to his tune. Really interesting premise and excution.
daimahou chapter 1 . 4/24/2019
Now the question, did he really send the letter to himself in the Leaky Cauldron (canon) or to himself in the Leaky Cauldron (with a Sirius father figure)?

corrections:

"He used the wand such is its power." Death corrected gently. "He had you see dabbled theoretically
wand, such
had, you see, dabbled

Sirius. Only could he? Because it
Only question, could he?

"What do I now?"
do I do now
mumphie chapter 1 . 4/19/2019
I would love to see more of this one.
gginsc chapter 1 . 4/6/2019
AND THEN? The sequel, please!
Allusernameshavebeentaken1 chapter 1 . 3/30/2019
Oooohhh! This is so good and exciting! I know you warned there wouldn't be more, but I wish there was.
But no matter, I have A step to the right to content myself with. And A Marauder's Plan to reread.
But there will always be a what would have happened now.
Anyway, thanks for writing! xx
Mionefan chapter 1 . 3/27/2019
Complicated ending! Harry in the story simply ceased to exist? Or the timeline ended and a new timeline formed? It hurts my head when I try to think of all the permutations of the actions Death and Harry caused. In a way, it's the same problem I have with time travel. It's a variation of the parallel or alternate universe theory. Oh the story is good, but now I'm wondering if Harry winds up with Hermione in his alternate future. This story would be a good choice for a full multi chapter treatment.
Fallow55 chapter 1 . 3/25/2019
xxxx KUDOS xxxx : )
hybrid3y3 chapter 1 . 3/25/2019
The concept of this story gave me the chills!
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