Reviews for Triumphant, the Dreamer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This will be an interesting fanfic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() orange man bad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished reading this whole fic over likea day and a half. It's THAT good. Seriously. (Or should I say Siriusly?) Definitely one of the best wider-wizarding-society worldbuilding fics I've seen! My only concern would be to say that the story progresses a bit too slowly - only reaching Christmas of first year after 215,000 words - but there's so much going on that I understand the struggle to balance covering everything with good pacing. I hope that you feel up to getting back into writing soon! |
![]() ![]() Amazing story. Pacing is a little in the slow side. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely story! Very much enjoyed it, one of the best I’ve read lately. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well and truly a pity that's seemingly discontinued or abandoned, cuz this kept me awake all night |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope that you will continue this story and will update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing story and I'm sorry to see that you've lost your inspiration to continue it. However being overly optimistic I've added it to my alerts because a new chapter would too wonderful to miss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the pissed and then there is PISSED looks like Dumbledore isn't taking any chances after this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love love looove your world building HOWEVER Your character building comes up short. Wish you could have done more with the Malfoys, you don't really capture Hermione nor Ron all that well. Tonks had quite an awkward introduction. Despite reading through their childhood, Harry's change of personality isn't completely smooth and is quite jaaring at times. Not a lot of development has gone to the characters while all the attention has been casted on the world elements. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this story! I am really looking forward to how you're going to continue it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, thank you for sharing ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably the best story ever! I love it so much and I’m so sad that you stopped writing this. Hopefully you’re going to continue this one day. I know I would be the first in line to read the new chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I freaking love this story so much! |
![]() ![]() The. Lore. God so much work had gone into this fic I'm honestly humbled and twice as amazed. Heather is simply the greatest OC I've ever read about in a fanfiction and every interaction is a delight ️ Thanks for sharing this with us lowly readers! haha Love, AnYa |