Reviews for Triumphant, the Dreamer
EACade chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
I like the concept a lot, and your writing has a really nice flow. Also, a solid portrayal of emotion! I'm not gonna read any more because mention of religion skeeves me out something fierce, but I wanted to let you know how much I like your writing style before I go~
kate1243 chapter 3 . 2/16/2017
I'm so glad she has magic! I hope she causes so much chaos with Harry. Can't wait to see what she'll do with magic.
Zombietooth chapter 4 . 2/16/2017
I'm really excited for this fanfiction!
Since reading the ultimate SI insert of the naruto fandom ("Dreaming of Sunshine"), I've been wondering why there isn't anything like it in the potter verse. And honestly, with the sheer amount of stories we Potter heads can choose from, I never understood why there isn't a single decent OCSI I could find.

I really enjoy reading about Heather and her struggles with her new infantile body, and especially your take on Petunia and the Dursleys. I'm interested how you are going to flesh the Potter universe out and explain how magic works.
Choas Babe chapter 4 . 2/16/2017
Always happy to see you! And I enjoy this take on it, the Oc/SI. Also, much more likely to see the positive results desired. And I have a friend who was very involved with raising her little brother and she thinks of him a little bit like he's her kid. Totally wonderful to see Heather getting caught up in that.
kate1243 chapter 2 . 2/16/2017
Really hope she gets reunited with Harry soon. Can't wait to see the siblings bond.
Tommy14 chapter 4 . 2/16/2017
Harry will have it much better this time around since his big sister is watching over him. I have to feel for Petunia having all the deaths of her family so close and then the twins left on her doorstep with a letter telling her about Lily's death. I guess she's doing her best with the twins. Thank goodness for Heather.
kate1243 chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
All of your stories are amazing and this one is no exception. Excited that harry gets an older sister, can't wait to see how she changes things. Thanks you for the new story, I'm sure I'll love it just as much as all your other ones.
MyDearGoddessofthemoonandsun chapter 4 . 2/16/2017
I love heather and her interactions with baby Harry. He really is her baby by this point. Petunia actually reminds me a little of Susan P in the chronicles of narnia books. She too tried to apply logic to caring for people especially after she had to relive her life again. Much like Petunia she would have also not gotten too close if she knew she would lose them eventually .

Will windless magical training might happen ?

How will Harry change by having a sister who is flourishing his curiosity?

Thanks for writing this
Mia Heartnet chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
Hi! This looks very promising and I hope go read more :)
One question tho, did you ment to write Moctezuma intead of Montezuma? I was a little confused there...
Cheers!
-Mia :3
KalenaGP chapter 4 . 2/16/2017
I loved it, can't wait to see their childhood. D
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