Reviews for Triumphant, the Dreamer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your mccheetoface line. I am enjoying this story having recently found it. Your characters resonate with me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This section is getting really old, tired of MC being a saint to a total bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean, they’re 5... it feels like you make them do too much too soon and simultaneously somehow make the pacing take forever. This is starting to seem more and more like one of those stupid “fix-it” fics that literally only exist for fluff at the expense of the story. |
![]() ![]() The beauty in the details as they said and this fanfic has just enough not to be overwhelming but not to less to be underwhelming, you can tell that the author put an effort to make this and it is worth that effort Please continue this I can’t wait to see those stuck-up Nobles put into place |
![]() ![]() I love this story ️️ And I love the details you add to the book allowing each character to be complex in there own rights. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Feels bad for the old man. Up to his eyeballs in shit and yet there's only so much one person can do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus fuck she's pathetic. Like edging on sub-human pathetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HERE, have a review! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story. Really. I expect a lot of jaw drops during the gala. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has been fantastic! I really hope you’re able to come back to it! |
![]() ![]() Yeah this is just the typicall cringe way, particularly, females write stories; always 'look I am so morally good, look at me!'. It's disgusting in the way it's so dishonest. The story is also atbest mediocre and let's not get started on the political and religious undertones you are trying to force down our throats. |
![]() ![]() Yeah, I really hate how the MC just accept being, as you call it, an indeptoured servant to some stranger, who abuses them and to make matters worse, you try to force readers toq empathise with abusers by showing their weaknesses. It's absolutely implausible that a 36 year old woman would just accept something like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh. Fanfics who utilize goblins really do make the original plot seem too extra, really, with money, loopholes, contracts and contacts it seems so easy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Connie you amazing woman, Heather you glorious lioness, harry you steadfast compassionate boy, 900 points for all of you |
![]() ![]() ![]() super yay for them |