Reviews for The Peace Not Promised
OK YOU GOT ME chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
Oh this seems to be interesting you got yourself a fish :D
Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
Go for it! You can do it! I believe in you!
Also kudos for not starting at the 5th year lake scene. It's nice to see a difference once in awhile. :)
Intrepignoramus chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
LOVE THIS
Max chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
Finally some mature story with detail...keep up tge good work and please update regularly...i will comment on your work regularly
Gerold chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
Kind of hope he focuses on himself first and makes an effort to visibly change that Lily notices rather then him trying to speak to her the first chance he got. It should take a long time for Lily to forgive him and it must happen after he makes laborious changes. He called her a mud blood a slur that denotes she's nothing more then a pig, that kind of word from a best friend is extrmely hurtful then again she did laugh at him while he was hung upside down so the pain goes two ways.
actionliker chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
nice, I/we hope to see more in the future!

keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
good Start :)
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