Brilliant! absolutely brilliant!

Fuck u made me cry, this was a brilliant chapter, the despair the hopelessness of the situation soo real

I thought they could have used the philosophers stone to bring back his hand, ik fma influence

Ahhh! Did u really had to take away his hand!

Quite brilliant this chapter, the way u wrote it!

Severus snape and the chamber of secrets lol!

I just can't understand why u made snape this pathetic, his lack of self worth should hardly be an issue at this point, I mean a grown up wizard, a very powerful one at that, fooling voldy for years and very accomplished potions master. Honestly it seems pothead is more mature than severus at this point

So snape knows how to make focus stones, so why doesn't he make some of those to sell, it should help his finances a bit

Ngl ur version of severus is kinda pathetic

Years of fooling the most dangerous dark wizard and look what u have turned him into, a pitiable hormone addled teenager being strung around by the nose by, everyone other than him seem to be more mature than him, please he's a 38 year old for God's sake with shit loads of experience

I think u do injustice to the character of severus snape, writing that he couldn't go and face few teenage girls sitting with his girlfriend, its just seems to be very out of character, teenage hormones or not with hi experience with life he should know better perhaps his reaction would have been more likely if severus remained a 17 year old and received only the crucial memories and not the experience or the abilities of his past life

I can't help but feel a bit dislike for lily for manipulating poor severus to brew the potion against his will, it takes a lot out of him to brew the potion the fact that its for someone who took pleasure in his plight doesn't help it either, can't help but feel lily is an hypocrite for her guilt tripping severus into trying to be freinds her freinds when they have given him no reason to be polite to them and that too when she never tries to get his angle. Get this guys the marauders and the slytherin pureblood snobs were the extreme ends of the same scale, one group bullying a poor slytherin because according to them all slytherins are evil and the other group bullying the muggleborns because they think that all muggleborns are worthless, given snape's background and homelife which instilled in him an inferiority complex soo deep its very obvious he would grasp at the single olive branch extended to him, the supposed light side never gave him any reason to side with them even dumbledoor who people look up to for being fair did severus dirty during the werewolve incident, he had absolutely no reason to side with the light, they never gave him one

great!

great!

great