Reviews for The Peace Not Promised
Beizanten chapter 2 . 6/3/2021
i love that you doesnt make easy for snape and dont bash lily. you are a genius
Beizanten chapter 1 . 6/3/2021
great beginning. i lobe this already
MageYew chapter 75 . 6/1/2021
I live how you basically turned Severus into a gentle parent mother hen indeed. I'm in awe that you can accomplish this and still keep him 100% in character
MageYew chapter 64 . 5/30/2021
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Fantastic scene! I was wondering when they would finally meet face to face and I am 100% not disappointed
MageYew chapter 50 . 5/28/2021
Ok, the idea of a basilisk literally running from chickens is hilarious
MageYew chapter 29 . 5/26/2021
I know I told you in my last comment that you are amazing. But seriously... you are amazing! I live that you brought up the cycle of abuse that happens so frequently in children who were not raised in loving homes. The effort Severus would have to out forth to break the cycle and the unlikely probability that he would have been capable the first time around.
MageYew chapter 15 . 5/25/2021
This is by far the most in character second chance fic I have ever read. Bar none! Wow.
Jaggerbone chapter 94 . 5/25/2021
This is one of the best Sev/Lily story ever. However, I have only one issue. The story didn't address the hypocrisy of Lily. I'm actually disgusted that Lily is friends with James and the Marauders. Can't she see that James bullied Snape to divide Lily and Snape? Simply because Snape of "existence". Despite knowing how much the Lake event scarred Snape, she's not even angry with the Marauders. Or even after knowingly that Lupin almost killed Snape cos of Sirius's prank. Does she even care for Snape? It's take two for a conflict. It is not purely Snape's fault. Despite reading 94 chapters now, I can't help but feel that Lily's love for Snape is not genuine. She never even said she's sorry only said that she feels crap about it. What?
Guest chapter 64 . 5/2/2021
Me gusta la historia pero creo que concuerda con snape perder la calma pues se describe como un mago calculador e inteligente y el que aya perdido la calma de esa manera y dejar a Lily a su suerte no cuadra con su personalidad
Amanthya chapter 94 . 5/1/2021
I feel sorry for Severus having to carry all of this, not the least of which is the burden of leadership of people who expect him to jump through hoops to prove himself 'worthy' of the supposed honour of being, perhaps nominally, in charge. And now not merely mostly on his own but entirely, because he's the only one now who, absent Dumbledore with similar war-leader experience, really understands how quickly, terribly and irreversably it can go completely sideways under his watch and be all (or so it will feel) his fault.

Contrastingly, the 'Light' side is lucky to have him. And I think he's rising well to the challenge. He's really something when he's no longer constrained to hurry-up-and-wait and can just go flat-out and full-steam ahead, isn't he? No punches pulled. He even makes use of his slight regret regarding the Malfoys and instinct to repay any perceived owings in a way that works to his own favour, to set in motion a plan that will either draw V into his trap or weaken him by removing a politically / magically / financially powerful follower (a win-win scenario).

I don't have time to comment further, unfortunately, so I'll just end by saying that I do hope this war doesn't, once again, leave him with nothing or end up taking his life (how much should any one man be made to suffer, especially needlessly or fruitlessly?).
Siddiqm2000 chapter 94 . 4/28/2021
Great chapter

I can’t say that I’m happy that Severus revealed so much about himself, especially to Potter.

The chapter was amazing to read. I actually like Severus’ plan. I can’t wait to see how it goes. I don’t like the fact that this story is coming to an end though. It’s been my companion for the past 4 years.

I wonder the characters you’re planning on killing. I just hope that both Severus and Lily survive though. That’s what matters. I also hope that Severus is the one who defeats Voldemort

Thank you
Meadow chapter 94 . 4/27/2021
Oh my goodness, this chapter was AMAZING! I’m so looking forward to finding out what happens next :)
DemonRaily chapter 94 . 4/26/2021
Things are going down like nothing else here, one final all or nothing bet. This story was going super strong all the way up to this and I feel it will have just as strong ending to top it off
JagBone chapter 94 . 4/26/2021
Thank you for the amazing chapter. You know it's kinda sad that people still think that is Lily too good for Snape. That's the whole vibe I'm getting from this fanfic. I just hope Snape does something or something happens to Snape to make people regret their misunderstanding of him. However, looking at the title, I doubt that what's gonna happen. Still, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 94 . 4/25/2021
Great chapter
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