Reviews for The Peace Not Promised |
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Ignis Tenebris chapter 92 . 3/19/2021 Can't wait for the next update, and I hope Protego Diabolica would make an appearance, with how much Snape has accomplished, he's at the top in alchemy, with his pursuit of Elixir of Life he will reach the pinnacle of potioneering, making him able to cast this spell would place him at the top of DADA, his last but not least field of expertise. |
Ignis Tenebris chapter 93 . 3/19/2021 Such an interesting read, rich characters, sharp plot twists, a fanfic close to the level of novels it's based on. However, I disagree with the death of Albus, I think there's an omission in your plot, for there could be a way for Dumbledore to stay alive and fend off Voldemort and his Death Eaters, a spell to be exact, which also would have been a token to Grindelwald - Protego Diabolica. Exceedingly potent defensive and offensive capabilities simultaneously, there's no way Dumbledore hadn't known about this spell and how to cast it. It's also a spell capable of destroying Horcruxes, since it's similar to Fiendfyre. |
MMax chapter 16 . 3/14/2021 But when James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter bring the topic up, she will wonder what happened. |
Amalgum chapter 93 . 3/14/2021 Best snape back in time till date, change my mind if u can? |
thrawnca chapter 93 . 3/13/2021 I like the idea of a final confrontation where the Light actually knows what's going on and hasn't been kept in the dark. And if Tom is going to do them the favour of keeping his mortal body and his Horcrux together, so that they can kill two birds with one curse, they should take full advantage :). There may be longer term ramifications for Severus, though, once the war is won, if his origins become more widely known. The Department of Mysteries will be very interested indeed, should they find out. Not much action, yet very big happenings... |
Guest chapter 93 . 3/13/2021 The tradition in the Prince family of naming boys using Latin names continues. Amadeus, Severus, now Albus. |
RedHood001 chapter 93 . 3/13/2021 OOOOOOOH! He's going to tell them EVERYTHING! OKAY! |
Mort chapter 93 . 3/13/2021 "Discard the Mask" indeed! I didn't think he would reveal the secret. -Finally a more detailed description on Snape's wand. Good to know, even if it's fanfic. Another fanfic describe a different wood: English Oak. -Not surprising he would pick his name for his child. -I wonder if Lily is planning to conjure butterfies from lily petals. That'll be a sight to behold. -So the Order will now have several leaders instead of one? Whether its effective or not remains to be seen. -How will Crouch becomes Minister now Dumbledore isn't alive to endorse him for the position? -Hopefully some of subsequent chapters focuses on Dumbledore's will and/or contingency plans. -35...40...now 43 and counting. Your update are getting longer... |
Sanas22 chapter 93 . 3/13/2021 I can't wait for the next update! Everyone's reaction! Argh! |
freedom89justice chapter 93 . 3/13/2021 gracias x el capitulo, no se si lo revelara todo o solo lo que necesitan saber ¿? |
DemonRaily chapter 93 . 3/13/2021 Things are getting super real now. To tell the truth I never expected him to reveal the truth to so many people at all. I guess now that Albus is dead it's time to put on the big boy pants and face the music. This story is alive for four years now, and I never stopped to by excited about a new update. |
Bookworm 123 chapter 1 . 3/13/2021 This is my favourite fanfiction of Severus and character portrayal is realistic and the plot is simply great .Thank you for this amazing story . |
Grace chapter 92 . 3/10/2021 Well damn, this got spicy, btw amazing story. |
darkwolfhunter chapter 92 . 3/6/2021 This is the one of the best time travel /redemption /not overpowered /rational fic I have read in my life. This is one of the only times a author is able to make me fit in the person's shoes and make me bother to write a review. Keep it up! |
adi6123 chapter 86 . 3/4/2021 I'm writing another review for I want to make it clear that I think your writing's beautiful, I've enjoyed the starting chapters very much. You've got a gift for writing. I don't have anything against Severus or Lily. They both have their flaws and strengths. I just wish that they had a healthy relationship not an abusive one. |