Reviews for The Peace Not Promised |
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Amaryllis chapter 31 . 9/21/2022 Laughing at this kek Joke's on him. Reality remained persistent. |
Amaryllis chapter 31 . 9/21/2022 Yuppp another golden point of this story, see Sev denting Voldie more death Eaters After all, you are fighting this war already from the most important of fronts. To deny the dark lord a generation of reinforcements |
Amaryllis chapter 30 . 9/21/2022 How it fits the word puzzle to the title there.. Only takes once... Indeed paralleling the abused act "It only takes once for you to be beyond my help! I cannot lose you!" |
Amaryllis chapter 29 . 9/21/2022 That's make sense but I truly believe dr Evans should see how truly Sev changed there |
Amaryllis chapter 28 . 9/21/2022 A bit typo here as double H HHe was becoming ridiculously easy to manipulate. |
Amaryllis chapter 25 . 9/20/2022 Damn that's mean Regulus got marked so much early? Like Draco then |
Amaryllis chapter 22 . 9/20/2022 Btw only after rereading I am understand d the innuedos "He was brewing a complex potion and I… wound up accidentally distracting him and basically blew him up. This is what it looks like when he has to play catch up." |
Amaryllis chapter 21 . 9/20/2022 Yikes indeed so mean there from that paragraphs Pandora chose then to enter the conversation in her airy helpful way. "The incident by the lake, I think. The time when James Potter hung Snape upside down and-" "Whoa!" Susan exclaimed, holding her finger up to Pandora's lips in a silencing gesture. "Etiquette lesson. We do not talk about the bits of another girl's guy. Especially not right in front of her!" P.S: also damn transmutating Basilisk venom? Interesting |
Amaryllis chapter 20 . 9/20/2022 Yay missed! |
Amaryllis chapter 17 . 9/20/2022 He had always wondered if truly no Slytherin volunteered their service for their school. Was there truly not a single one who wished to fight upon the side of right? To earn a measure of redemption for their House? Or had they been denied their chance by a mistrusting world I think is both, poor Slyterin and how love I am to your Slyterin perspective |
Amaryllis chapter 10 . 9/19/2022 Very great to have Slyterin perspective screamed out loud! "I tell all who stand here today! I, under no uncertain terms, will not become a Death Eater! That is not the fated path of the House of Slytherin!" He paused, turning his eyes from the disbelieving Potter and sweeping across the silent Slytherin youths who stood beside him, meeting the eyes of the one who assisted him when he needed help the most. "And if there is any Slytherin still willing to follow me, know that our road will not take that direction." |
Amaryllis chapter 1 . 9/19/2022 Hello author, on my way of rereading as your fic deserve it Hello dear readers. Here is a 'Snape relives his past' type of story with eventual SxL. There are many just like it but this one's mine. |
Amaryllis chapter 97 . 9/19/2022 Whoaa so Determinator could act as mass 'livht based portkey'? Cool! But I am really mad at ya author, when I become attached to Rawkas as he feels like adorable eager Lil brother to Severus.. You dare to kill him off suddenly? Not even without Sev reacting? ACruel! And y'all thought my last cliff-hanger was cruel. Would it not be out-of-this-world sadistic to build a world for 90 chapters and get you all attached to the character and kill him off so suddenly? Looking at you GRR Martin. |
Amaryllis chapter 96 . 9/19/2022 Damn where Snape being brought out? |
Amaryllis chapter 95 . 9/19/2022 I am really like the hearing ngl, and do you know how much Innlove the sentimentality from Aberforth there? |